White_Liger

A mountain cannot have two tigers jajaja ✌🏻

I'm sorry but it's the translator haha, English is not my native language and having about ten chapters I can't edit them since I just corrected them and that would reduce my desire to write to a minimum haha, and it's either correct or keep writing, but thanks for the tip I will correct it in the new chapters I am writing.

I write the backstory I want, if you have constructive criticism to make I listen to you but don't write something like "stop embarrassing yourself" as if you were the wisest person hahaha, if you want to tell me that the backstory is exaggerated that's fine, but putting "stop embarrassing yourself" seems like an excess to me, but surely there are many people who complain a lot and do little hahaha.

Felicia Hardy had the power to change the odds, this power is somewhat unconscious, she can change her luck making for example a pot fall on the head of a man who wants to shoot her or trip a man who was going to hit her, it also affects people who spend a lot of time with her causing them bad luck and accidents, but the powers were not only hers but also her father gave her his and thus made her powers increase and the bad luck caused her parents to die because that is not something a four year old girl can control if even her father could not. also keep in mind that this is kind of an alternate Earth as I'm going to add characters that are not from Marvel or the dates are not exact as I don't have the ability to do the 616 country perfectly but I want to post characters are from there, it mesclar.

She awakened her powers when she had not yet revived the memories of her past life, she lived four years and her powers awakened causing the traffic accident where her parents died. Now it is necessary to understand that after the accident a girl who saw her parents die and she survived unharmed would think she did something wrong and that is why being in a state of anguish and very strong emotions, she managed to release her memories that were supposed to be released with the passage of time, and now Felicia has four years of memories with her parents to absorb the anguish caused by their death. You have to understand that the mental state is still confused because you have not spent much time assimilating the memories, because those memories and emotions are yours and no one else's, it's like if you lose your memory and after a year of new experiences you recover them, the year you lived are also your memories and feelings too, because in that year maybe you fell in love or lost a friend, but despite recovering the memories you would also feel the loss or love, I hope you understand what I mean haha.

You could give him magic of art like Rill from Black Cloverc or Sai of Naruto. Good Chapter ✌🏻

English is my second language, so translating from Spanish to English is tricky haha. I will try to improve it over time. Besides I am editing the chapters that did not convince me while I write new ones.

Out of 10 how you merged the worlds, how was the character development, even the harem doesn't feel forced damn that's something that I have a hard time writing like crap not forcing a harem haha, it's one of the best works I read from Marvel and HP congratulations **: Any advice not to force a harem? I'm new to writing haha