I think he means Qiu Qiu is still cute instead of turning extremely muscular? Bullet-proof vests are generally extremely flat with many plates (compared to abs?) covering it. You can search for images and then imagine that's a 10 year old girl.

Go check the review comments from Shaq_fu and you can find why Author has decided to temporarily hiatus Dual Cultivation and focus instead on this Prequel.

Directed by Michael Bay... but yeah cars don't explode normally that's movie magic.

Honestly, my biggest issue with this novel are two things: 1) The written quality of the English gets very choppy or down right bad in many areas. Sentences don’t flow together and some words are used where they probably meant something else. This is for sure the main reason I had to drop; filling in my own words while trying to read the story almost non-stop is frustrating. Not sure if it is poorly written or bad translating but for sure needs some editing. 2) The love interest character is extremely one dimensional and served herself up on a plate for free, never disagrees or has any sort of opinion or independence, and is honestly a background character… not something one would expect when it’s half of the title of the novel…

Author is right; who keeps cutting onions under me?

See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

Death flag set! Excellent!

I think you meant to say rewards instead of wounds?

Author, this has been bothering me for a couple of chapters now but MC’s actions should invoke the action of cheering by his people. Not him literally telling them, “this is where you cheer.” I have seen this repeat a few times now. You can improve your writing by fixing this!