thecrazy14

Case 53s, known as Deviants or Subjects by their makers and variously as Abominations, Demons or the Branded to the public, are a group of parahumans identified by their typically bizarre or monstrous external appearance. They were so-called because their origin was the 53rd anomalous case investigated by the PRT. (worm wiki)

ahh the boss music started

I think its to early in the story and it would just feel shallow.

welcome to being a creator of media people will always tell you they can do better or that your story is shit. just remember, this Is your story and it goes were you want it, if people dislike it well to bad. do it for the fans that like your story not for those that don't.

really should get a gun and holster. price is cheap I assume.

I wonder if it's acid rain?

hope that the water in the building is not contaminated.

A very boring story lacking any real depth. It feels like a boring translation or Ai story though the concept is ok it feels like a rough draft of a first story that shows the way the story progresses rather the a fully fleshed out story.