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DNOwithDNA2yrReplied to ATiredReaderThese chapters are entirely original, when the first few were based on material I wrote a long time ago, so even after rewriting it, it still had quite few drops in quality. Thank you for your understanding, hoping you can enjoy what's coming next.
Ch 16 Chapter 8: PvP Arena- DNOwithDNA2yrReplied to ATiredReader
First of all, thank you for your time. As for the POV changes, I struggled to just make it readable from my original version, and it's not a style of POV change I do anymore now, so you don't need to worry about it happening again.
Ch 6 Chapter 6 - The Three Musketeers - DNOwithDNA3yrReplied to Kazeno
is there a more lovely smile than this?
Ling Lan felt speechless. She thought that the mecha operators in 250 Mecha Clan were bad enough. However, these recruits were worse. Additionally, why were they staring at her like she was a devil? F**k, her looks were definitely not bad. No, she was definitely a good-looking person… erm, this was not the main point. The point was, why were they looking at her like that? Was there something wrong with their eyes? - DNOwithDNA3yrReplied to Readingmage
The ratio of habitable planets is extremely low. If you discover 100 planets a day, it's unlikely for you to find an habitable planet in the year.... There's no life to be killed and nothing to be wasted. Instead, not doing anything would be a waste of the planet's resources.
For the first five years, the first mecha clan that discovered the natural resources on the new planet would get a portion of it. After that, the Federation would start taking more of it. 10 years later, all the natural resources on the planet would be excavated. - DNOwithDNA3yrReplied to Kazeno
come on tanya has a lovely smile in battle
Ling Lan felt speechless. She thought that the mecha operators in 250 Mecha Clan were bad enough. However, these recruits were worse. Additionally, why were they staring at her like she was a devil? F**k, her looks were definitely not bad. No, she was definitely a good-looking person… erm, this was not the main point. The point was, why were they looking at her like that? Was there something wrong with their eyes? - DNOwithDNA3yrReplied to Beta_Tauri
Entering the military for a desk job is the best. Both are idiots. One won't have a job and the other will have a dangerous job.
The two brothers ended their conversation unhappily. Chen Yang and his wife felt their world turning upside down. Their talented older son didn't want to enter the military while their slightly underperforming younger son wanted to enter the army. - DNOwithDNA3yrReplied to Beta_Tauri
Not really. He's certainly observant, but not smart. If he was smart he would've secured a future in the military outside of the battlefield. A high pay low risk job.
"No reason," Chen Yifan replied impatiently. The six years in the military academy made him understand that the world of soldiers was not as pure as what he had imagined. There were different factions and powers in the military. If he wanted to rise above everyone else, he needed to follow what everyone else was doing. Chen Yifan was unable to accept this. - DNOwithDNA3yrCommentedCh 975 Zergs, Move Out!
- DNOwithDNA3yrCommentedCh 974 The Consequences of Killing a High Noble
- DNOwithDNA3yrCommented
At this point I just wish it could just be quickly over with. The only consequences there could be we know he won't have any of. No one around him will die, he will not be hurt, he will kill a few people and either the high nobles will give up due to deterrence or elevate him to some hononary bullshit due to a random reason. This is getting really tiring and nothing at that point could fix it. The author is bad at writing anything remotely dramatic and it can be felt. There are no worse parts in the story than things that are supposedly dramatic.
Ch 973 Thirteen Top Operatives - DNOwithDNA3yrReplied to LazyDeath
the author is really downplaying its strength, even young. The whole army shouldn't be able to beat the 3 trillion zergs, let alone a single fleet. He forcefully increases the strength of the high nobles in hope people would feel something akin to "pressure" which itself is inexistent.
"Yes, but I will need time." After becoming a Star Knight, Hong Dali was still able to request help from the Zerg race, especially the Golden Emperor Beetle. This large fellow could even fight against the High Nobles' Starfleet. - DNOwithDNA3yrCommented
this is getting painful to read. Dali with 6000 stats let his enemies attack him before attacking, walked slowly, took 5 seconds to talk before punching, spent time talking, spent time finding his stuff... she should be dead, even if it didn't hit her vitals, it literally went through arteries. Even if the blood loss was prevented somehow by the charring, it should have blocked her blood from flowing, and beyond basic complications that would cause her death anyway, her arm should die from lack of oxygen and start rotting before she recovers. On top of that there is qianxue who said "don't offend him" after he did and "don't kill him" when it was too late. If he didn't kill Malone after directly assaulting him, everyone present would die anyway.
Ch 972 Kill! - DNOwithDNA3yrReplied to LazyDeath
and anyway, her heart was pierced and charred, with how slow Dali dealt with things, she is already dead
"Sister Nianwei, how are you?" After settling everyone, Hong Dali nervously rushed over and hugged Li Nianwei. He anxiously asked, "Sister Nianwei, are you okay? Quick, talk to me!" While asking, he frantically searched through his pockets. After quite a while, he finally remembered that all of his stuff was in his space watch and hurriedly took out a handful of Dali Beans and stuffed them into Li Nianwei's mouth. "Sister Nianwei, quick, eat these, they might be of use!" - DNOwithDNA3yrCommented
No, it will be discovered anyway at some point.... So you have no choice but to fight the high nobles. If the author keeps it jnder a rug I'll drop.
"What are your plans?" The current Hong Dali didn't have his usual cheerful expression anymore, because he was very clear that a single wrong move now might cause all of them to end up dead. - DNOwithDNA3yrCommented
FIVE SECONDS! ANYONE WOULD HAVE HAD TIME TO REACT! EVEN ATTACK DALI! FFS AUTHOR
Although in words, the whole process seemed very long, actually, from the time Hong Dali stood in front of Malone to killing him, only five seconds had passed. There wasn't even time for the others to react. - DNOwithDNA3yrCommented
they shouldn't even have had the time to move before Dali killed that bitch Malone.... THE STATS AUTHOR AGILITY ID PART OF IT
"Protect the Lord!" The eight guards had also realized that things didn't seem right and stood in front of Malone, blocking him from Hong Dali. The front two guards attacked together towards Hong Dali, punching towards him with their fists! - DNOwithDNA3yrCommentedCh 925 Come, Come, Come, Hit Me!