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Becky was dizzy before, and after some treatment, she woke up and was lying on the bed, weak. He still had some hope, but when he heard Dear translator if you cannot keep the genders correctly, just use the characters name when referring to them. so confusing! Above is Becky the king, obviously male, first sentence uses ’ she’ as in “ she woke up” And then next sentence is “he still....” If character is first introduced as male, gender usage are HE,HIM,HIS,HIMSELF, OTHERS ARE MALE, BOY, YOUNG BOY, YOUNG MAN, MAN, PRINCE, LORD, KING, DUKE, COUNT, VISCOUNT, BARON ETC.... If character is introduced as female, gender usage are SHE, HER, HERSELF, OTHERS ARE FEMALE, GIRL, YOUNG GIRL, YOUNG WOMAN, WOMAN, PRINCESS, LADY, LADIES, QUEEN, DUCHESS, COUNTESS, BARONESS ETC.. ITS ALREADY DIFFICULT TO HAVE A RUNNING IMAGERY WHILE READING ON WHATEVER IS BEING DESCRIBED AND WHAT IS HAPPENING IN THE STORY AND THEN HAVE THE IMAGERY SWITCH GENDERS MIDSENTENCE!
Dear author, when are you going to continue writing? Your readers are waiting. May e you can hire a sub writer . someone you can dictate to chapter by chapter. if the assistant is good, you can give an outline and they will flesh it out like in korean dramas were they have a team. surely you can have a contract made with regards to saLary, rights and royalties. i think you will be able to finish more books faster too.