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villakaryl

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  • villakaryl
    villakaryl10mth
    Commented

    Interesting!

    Ch 13 Leaving Purgatory
    altalt
    Rogue Immortal
    Fantasy · DJRogue
    detail
  • villakaryl
    villakaryl1yr
    Commented

    How do i become someone who corrects wrong gender usage in novels. will i get paid?

    Ch 4 Astral Traversing (1)
    altalt
    Astral Apostle
    Games · Uniform Armor
    detail
  • villakaryl
    villakaryl1yr
    Commented

    Gender usage is so confusing. character is introduced as a king, a male and then referred to as she, sometime HE, then back to she. same with female roles. gender keeps switching from SHE to HE. stop doing that please.

    Ch 3 Forced Migration (3)
    altalt
    Astral Apostle
    Games · Uniform Armor
    detail
  • villakaryl
    villakaryl1yr
    Replied to Black_lotus_2004

    Becky was dizzy before, and after some treatment, she woke up and was lying on the bed, weak.   He still had some hope, but when he heard Dear translator if you cannot keep the genders correctly, just use the characters name when referring to them. so confusing! Above is Becky the king, obviously male, first sentence uses ’ she’ as in “ she woke up” And then next sentence is “he still....” If character is first introduced as male, gender usage are HE,HIM,HIS,HIMSELF, OTHERS ARE MALE, BOY, YOUNG BOY, YOUNG MAN, MAN, PRINCE, LORD, KING, DUKE, COUNT, VISCOUNT, BARON ETC.... If character is introduced as female, gender usage are SHE, HER, HERSELF, OTHERS ARE FEMALE, GIRL, YOUNG GIRL, YOUNG WOMAN, WOMAN, PRINCESS, LADY, LADIES, QUEEN, DUCHESS, COUNTESS, BARONESS ETC.. ITS ALREADY DIFFICULT TO HAVE A RUNNING IMAGERY WHILE READING ON WHATEVER IS BEING DESCRIBED AND WHAT IS HAPPENING IN THE STORY AND THEN HAVE THE IMAGERY SWITCH GENDERS MIDSENTENCE!

    Ch 3 Forced Migration (3)
    altalt
    Astral Apostle
    Games · Uniform Armor
    detail
  • villakaryl
    villakaryl1yr
    Commented

    Dear author, when are you going to continue writing? Your readers are waiting. May e you can hire a sub writer . someone you can dictate to chapter by chapter. if the assistant is good, you can give an outline and they will flesh it out like in korean dramas were they have a team. surely you can have a contract made with regards to saLary, rights and royalties. i think you will be able to finish more books faster too.

    Ch 189 Preparing to Return to Shaihshire
    altalt
    The Phoenix Aspect
    Fantasy · DJRogue
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  • villakaryl
    villakaryl3yr
    Replied to villakaryl

    Has this story been dropped?hello?

    Ch 1 Souls Actually Exist after Death?
    altalt
    It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future
    Sci-fi · Madam Ru
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  • villakaryl
    villakaryl3yr
    Commented

    What happens after chapter 1482?

    Ch 1 Souls Actually Exist after Death?
    altalt
    It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future
    Sci-fi · Madam Ru
    detail