Love the story. Its hard to fund such a sweet story on this site. Even the grammar is good. This is one of the few that I would recommend. Keep going and thank you for the chapters.

The story has an interesting plot but the grammar is very bad. my greatest dislike is when females are referred to as males. the 'he' and 'she' are constantly being mixed up. throwing this into something like MS Word would fix most of the grammer issues.