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Kotachua

Kotachua

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2018-03-30 JoinedSingapore
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Posted

    Great Writing! The first chapter has a very strong hook into the story! Do keep it up with your writing! Highly recommended to everyone. Nice.

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    The Heart of Gaia
    Fantasy · EldritchTheDead
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to marialawal31

    Thanks for the feedback, will definitely adjust them later.

    Percy relaxed after noticing his homely but messy room and ruffled his messy hair before proceeding to dress himself up in a simple pair of dark blue jeans and a white tee. His muscular physique can be seen through his simple attire as he tidied himself in the mirror.
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    The Dawn of Heroes
    Sci-fi · Kotachua
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Commented

    Great, another webnovel **** up. Guess I better stick to reading top 20 novels in the future. Since any other novels on this site are prone to being dropped.

    Ch 264 You Knocked Over My Furnace
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    Building The Ultimate Fantasy
    Eastern Fantasy · Li Hongtian
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to EldritchTheDead

    Thanks for the support!

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    The Dawn of Heroes
    Sci-fi · Kotachua
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to Drakonous

    Thanks for the catch.

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    The Dawn of Heroes
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Posted

    I like how different this novel's setting is as compared to other novels I have read. There's some English issues that can be improved like sentence structure and grammer, but overall it is smooth to read.

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    A Demon Of An Angel
    Contemporary Romance · RiniStella
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Posted

    The sentence structure and grammer can be improved, but the point the author is trying to convey is still easily understandable. I like that the author's description of the setting is detailed.

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    A Night Like Any Other
    Teen · marialawal31
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to iam_adh

    Can't deny that he is named Percy because of Percy Jackson lol. But I changed the last name for my novel, not as smooth sounding though haha.

    "Comrades! Shall we meet again in the afterlife!" Percy shouted as he raises his sword in the air and charges towards the swarm of creatures.
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    The Dawn of Heroes
    Sci-fi · Kotachua
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to iam_adh

    Thanks for the support!

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    The Dawn of Heroes
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to Drakonous

    O.O didn't even know there was the term, parallel sentencing lol. English is hard. Haha

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    The Dawn of Heroes
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to Drakonous

    Thanks for the heads up. Tenses had always been my biggest nemesis haha.

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    The Dawn of Heroes
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to Drakonous

    Thanks for the heads up. Tenses had always been my biggest nemesis haha.

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    The Dawn of Heroes
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to JennyS

    A lesson needs to be taught =D

    Ch 6 Abigale Armitage!
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    The Dawn of Heroes
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to DaoistToDieFor

    Thank you very much for your kind support!

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    The Dawn of Heroes
    Sci-fi · Kotachua
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to For_my_dal

    Thank you very much for your kind support!

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    The Dawn of Heroes
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Replied to JennyS

    Thank you very much for your kind support!

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    The Dawn of Heroes
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Posted

    Interesting start as of chapter one, it seems to be about magical girls. The writing is good enough that I can read it smoothly and understand the point the author is trying to convey. Good Job!

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    The In-Between of Fiction and Reality
    Fantasy · insertsound
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Posted

    Review as of Chapter 10. I like how the system has a personality, and the description of the MC, Maria is clear and lets you understand her personality and thoughts well. The English usage is also good enough that I can read and understand the story without having to guess the meaning the author is trying to convey. Overall good job!

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    Troublesome disaster
    Fantasy Romance · DaoistToDieFor
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Posted

    Great writing! It feels comparable to some of the paperback novels I read in the past. (Nowadays I'm just a web novel junkie.) The characters are filled with urgency from the get-go and with character. The setting is also well described and paints a clear picture in my mind. Adding this to my library, and will catch up later when more chapters are in =D

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    BloodBorn
    Fantasy · RaedaX_1
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  • Kotachua
    Kotachua3mth
    Posted

    The writing is great and draws me into the story very well. The characters' speeches are to the point and with character. The world the author is brewing seems to be huge with tons of room for expansion from the get-go. Great job!

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    Pandora's Curse: Key To Immortality
    Fantasy Romance · SleepyKola
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