Why ask about the ages if they’re all older?

But why is everyone a doormat in this story 😩

Now that’s just greedy 😂 destroy a whole country while at it

I don’t see how his dilemma is a dilemma, he doesn’t need the chakra paper at this stage, if he needs to become a gennin for 400 why hesitate? 😅

Author has to be smart enough to properly write a character like Lelouch

Honour amongst devils? Interesting

I was just about to say that as well

Thanks for the chapter! Also why do you say the Manda and not simply Manda? It feels awkward to read or is it just me?

I genuinenly like Orochi in this story of yours haha

Just something to think about, in the original HP text wizards never swore by Merlin, that’s all fanfic

I’m so confused by the shift of the mc’s personality 😓

Thanks for the chapter however author… have you actually seen a 7 month old baby before?😓 I know it’s fiction but still 😂 that’d be an interesting sight

From a detached reflection the coma time-skip route came out of nowhere, it broke up the rhythm you had established. It felt like listening to your favourite artist performing one of your favourites only for them start coughing

So you told us the plot points for your entire story in ch 1 😩😭

I thought he was getting rid of Danzo as he almost died by his hands

So much inconsistency 😓

What about mystogan?

The real question is, do you know how to write a romance that isn’t cringe worthy?🤔 if yes then sure

Not to put you down author however, this chapter felt like a chore to read 😅