Otavioagabes
Just a reader
of reading
365
Read books
Ok. continue with the good work and i'll continue with suggestions
It's just that all the protagonists of other novels start with max s*x stats, and that doesn't make any sense, cause they aren't supposed to be used to having a d*ck. I hope you can make more than one chapter a week in the future, but if not, is understandable. I alredy imagine the scene where Yurine refuses the training iniatially but accepts unwillingly after she knows it's her father's will. You could make her shy of staying naked in front of the headmaster at first, but, after sessions of the training, she slowly loses her shyness, even talking to her while having an erection. You could make her with phimosis too if you want, cause she possibly didn't make the exercises to avoid it, and the first session of the headmaster would be to correct that. You could make the first s*x class to be a physical assessment of her capabilities. The muscle training could be normal workouts with the supervision of the headmaster dressed as a cute gym loli and Yurine completely naked (is a lewd novel after all). She could use healing magic to speed the recovery of Yurine so that she has faster results. Yurine would get toned fast, but not overly muscular. It would be fun to see Kuroe going to gym to visit her master and be shocked to see the headmaster with a smug expression while Yurine bangs a hip thrust machine with her c*ck, making sounds of metal hitting metal and making the machine bend. I could talk about tests for her to be graded along the way, but this text is already too long. I hope you continue with the good work and include this soon in your novel
It would be cool to have more futas besides Yurine. For example, you could make a contrast between the headmaster and her d*ck, she being a cheerful and cute loli and having a huge c*ck and big stamina. also, i think it would be cool if Yurine has sex classes with the headmaster with the justification of ensure her capability of spread her lineage. She could have an endurace training, to prevent her of c*mming too fast, a stamina training to prevent go limp fast, a c*m training eensure she c*ms enough and with enough thickness tto ensure she could impregnate someone, and, for the last, a muscle training to avoid she getting tired fast. Initially, you could make her bad in all these subjects, like her being a quickshot, getting limp fast and c*mming too little and too thin and slowly progressing tto her having improvements in these areas. I even have an idea for the c*m training: the headmaster could order her to fill a small basin with c*m and slowly progress in size as she c*ms more. when she finally fills every size, she would start again but filling then with thick c*m, which would be harder
An idea. We NEED a bath scene hahahahaha, but not with s*x, just teasing and Kuroe admiring her mistress's growth, crying silent tears when she sees the size of her c*ck, making a naughty remark at how big it got, like how her little snake turned into a mighty dragon or simply yelling "huge" faking a shocked expression to make Yurine embarassed. She could tease her making sexy poses just to see how big she gets when erect
So two big chested girls with the black haired having short black hair and the other one similar to Lumine? understood. You could have made at least a chapter with a resume of the time before the timeskip, like the protagonist learning how to be a girl and having difficulties with his new sex, like him getting a scare of his (now her) first period and the growing of her body ( as a guy, having big boobs would be strange to someone who had nothing his entire former life). I recomend to remake the first chapter to improve the worldbuiding by showing the moment of her reincarnation (i know its cliche, but it works pretty well) and telling what family she serves, from which kingdom, who are her parents, etc. This story has great potential, i hope you continue
we need a description of their appearences and age
iit would be cool tto sometimes have the protagonist's pov
Big d*ck loli, noice. I hope for some bath scenes where the maid tends for her mistress's c*ck or her spying the loli f*cking an older maid. The loli could learn how to have sex with the older maid, being a quickshot and getting soft to quickly iniatily, but f"cking her to submission when she trains her stamina enough.
we need the source or a illustration
is she nude? why would she be nude...
when did she mention a daughter?
you forgot to show it, author
his super power is don't die from lack of fat in organism
Author, do you think that would be interesting to explore the sexual capabillities of Chelsea's children? by the common sense of the bunny kin, as soon as they can get erect, produce sperm or have a thick enough c*m to impregnate women, they would be sent to breed. There, they probably would need to get trained, but that's not the focus of this post. And also, i think it would be cool if every children of hers had a distinct characteristic depending of their mother's race, like the succubus having a bigger stamina, the centarus being bipedal and having a horse c*ck, etc.