RamenRonin

Not many good Castle fics but this is a good one.

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Badass

Quite confusing, who's side was he on? The kid or the cop? Wasnt wasnt very clear.

When did he chase the game? You spent 20 chapter establishing that hes different and doesn't change the game.

The conversations feel very stiff.

You should have him join one of the broadcasters as a temp punit for the world cup. Show off his tactical brain.

what year is it?

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For anyone wondering, I just checked his Patreon, and he's updated about 20 more chapters on there. It's so safe to say he is just not uploading them anywhere, but there anymore. Seems a silly thing to me because the way to get more paid readers is to grow your reader base with the free content, not sure how anyone if gonna discover his story if he only publishes behind a pay wall. Anyway its his writing and he can do whatever he wants with it I guess although it would have been nice of him to at least give us an update and let us know this instead of just blanking every reader who asks for clarification on what's happening to the story.