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lol juste par ce que tu n'a pas de pierre de pouvoir tu publie plus ta pas honte? sérieux tu fait pitié je me demande pourquoi j'ai voté et donné mes pierre a ton livre
the story is good, it has great potential my favorite character and the mc the progress of the story is well we learn more and more about the world and the past of the mc more coal scene and fights they need more chapter but you are very well started it will be necessary to develop the next part where he goes to the academy to learn these powers are passing to *****hood etc. the greatest strength of this story and are potential you have put a brilliant backdrop with infinite possibilities