Synthesia

These last few chapters everyone has started talking like Aizen. Can you fix that?

Unimpressive story. Lots of grinding, the chinese author clearly didn't do much research. All the basic chinese tropes like "Extracting" chakra, and that kind of nonsense. From like chapter 80 that author just refuses to do anything plot wise other than fighting. Not even good fights either. Some fights he'll kill a jonin in like 3 attacks and the next a chunin manages to stall him. Not to mention the fact that he holds back using his sharingan for like the first hundred chapters, and holds back so badly his teammates die. It's a frustrating read, that's for sure.

To be honest, it's kind of cringe inducing. Even without the cheat, his learning speed is immense, which really leaves me boggled as to why no jonin wanted him to begin with. The dialogue is... bad. Generally speaking, it's pretty clear that this is a younger individuals first attempt at a story, and they are writing just to have fun. Would recommend reading what you write before posting. It can seem that something is well written while writing, but then upon re-reading it, it easy to find places to improve. Good luck with the writing experiment and I hope you improve lots!

It's okay to waste some time, but not that interesting. Blatantly chinese MC with all the tropes you'd expect of them and the hypocrisy they always spout. Literally breaks a dudes arm, after instigating a conflict by blackmailing two seniors. The system says it's not a good idea to do that long term, has the audacity to ask why, and then says he's actually a good person all along. These types of MC's always completely disassociate themselves from their actions and it's quite annoying honestly. Not to mention that this stuff really wouldn't fly in the setting. Also he plays stupid so often, that it genuinely feels like he's retarded. The whole playing a pig to eat the tiger mentality, except we get his inner thoughts where he really is just genuinely stupid. Then the story keeps trying to tell us the MC is actually smart. Telling with none of the showing. Anyway, it's just a poorly designed chinese self insert into the setting.

This seems a bit silly. The MC really thinks he's in control on a battlefield. Not exposing the sharingan in a battle filled with literal assassins seems like the the height of stupidity.

It's kind of annoying. He spends most of every chapter in his own head constantly tuning out everything around him. As professor oak would say, there's a time and place for everything, but not now. Could be good if he just monologues to himself every now and then, but it's never ending.

Just binged the whole fic. I enjoyed it quite a lot. Is there an upload schedule for this somewhere?

Novel doesn't really appeal at all. Lots of shit that feels forced. The blue splotches from the drink that make the doctor think he's been abused, despite not having been. The fact that he's diagnosed as quirkless then surprise, hes not. It's just one of those low quality fics. For what it's worth, the writing quality is at least decent.

Let me start by mentioning that I am biased against this type of character. I think everything Ein writes is in the top percent of fanfiction, but it feels like once you've read one MC of his you've kind of read them all. This is another story of his where I genuinely think that it might be better without all the female interaction because it's honestly kind of grating. I have a lot to say about the MC's but there's far more to his stories than that so I'll drop it. The premise is quite good. A barebones system kind of deal, and frankly I am biased in FAVOR of these types. Story seems a little slow but that's pretty standard for Ein. The quality makes up for it. This MC isn't a retard though. He's willing to offer trust like an actual person to the people who can and will help him, instead of being a brooding edgelord so that's good. Anyway, my only real problem is with the MC, and I'm heavily biased against characters like his. Give it a shot instead of letting my low rating dissuade you from reading. If you don't agree with what I've said, reply to my review so others can see both sides of things.

The beginning is a cliche I've seen a hundred times at least. The power of a druid is something I'd actually be interested in seeing. The grammar is atrocious and cripples the story. I couldn't even really focus past the grammar. I saw another review suggest writing in your native language and machine translating it. I would suggest you try this as well.