See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I like that you specified that Rose is not a gender bent, Harry, but I think that you then should not have given her the lightning bolt scar. I love the story so far, and since I started reading it after you have written quite a bit of it, I am looking forward to catching up.

i am so happy that we got some new chapters. i hope it keeps up.

that's too bad well i look forward to your next try however i do think this story still has potential so i do hope you come back to it.

So far i like the premise. i am looking forward to see where you take it.

i really liked your take on fallout new vegas and i would like you to take a spin at doing something similar in the future. i loved just about every direction you took the story in and from an avid fallout player, i would like to read your spin on fallout 4 if you ever decide to do it or any other story you decide to go with. Once i finish this comment i am going to look up any of your other works. keep up the great work.

i really love the story so far and besides a few random spelling mistakes that happen often to writers who write quickly, i believe that this story is very promising and i am looking forward to finishing it.

New chapter?

reading that last sentence was epic.

i love the john character.

I like the direction that you have chosen so far in the development of this story and I hope you continue the good work.

i like it so far keep up the good work.