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  • Free20play
    Free20play7d ago
    Replied to Astrumbpestry

    its not even that hes evil. hes just comically stupid. he gets a second chance at life and is still as stupid as before even though its what got him killed. not realistic behavior at all. one dimensional character idk why anybody would want to use him. its telling when the best naoya fics barely have anything to do with the actual character itself.

  • Free20play
    Free20play8d ago
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    wouldn’t be the first time an author retconned the literal theme of a fanfic and made a good origin story dumpster fired just cuz. not everyone needs to be related to space jesus. lemme guess mc’s mom is secretly a female merlin or some big shot xxx and blah blah blah. or he was never isekaied and all of his memories were fabricated by some big bad shot god/devil/villain. honestly i’ve seen authors ruin their fanfics before by retconning well written origin stories before so this wouldn’t be a first. i feel like making the mother or side of the family part of the supernatural would defeat a good part of the stories theme of an ordinary human in dxd reaching great heights. if the mc’s basically related to another generic god/goddess by proxy then all of his struggles never meant anything all of his accomplishments never meant anything.

  • Free20play
    Free20play9d ago
    Replied to Free20play

    realistically the higher ups would kidnap mc and cut his skull out extracting his memories. i’d actually like to see the mc be traumatized like that otherwise no point to giving him a return by death cheat if its not being taken advantage of to write such fates. maybe make it a learning lesson as to not reveal ones cheats to everybody he sees that smiles nicely? :-) 50 bucks you don’t have the balls to write something like that author.

  • Free20play
    Free20playa month ago
    Replied to NUNYABUSINESS

    can’t hate him though he consistently picks up peak fics just wish his pricing was more reasonable and we could choose membership options for the fics we want to read instead of it all being bundled up together. theres a dearth lack of toptier translators atm. most of the big shot translators kinda been afk and mia lately. some of them have even retired too.

  • Free20play
    Free20playa month ago
    Replied to Chaimos

    cool love it when multiple translators work on peak

  • Free20play
    Free20playa month ago
    Replied to daniel_rahn

    universe six makes the most sense. i don’t think a multiverse fic has the time to spend years waiting for characters to grow up or be born. most of us are here for the crack fic fun and waifus if we’re being honest universe six female saiyans are baddies shame there won’t be an android 21 but life is give or take.

  • Free20play
    Free20playa month ago
    Commented

    not saying i hate femboy elfs just its overused in ff.

  • Free20play
    Free20playa month ago
    Replied to LazyLord

    please no. this is a bad idea. super smart protags are near impossible to write in fanfiction 90% of the time not to mention mc already has enough going for him. why does the mc need capsule tech anyways? he’s in a comic book universe theres probably like 10 super genius super villains in each city whom the author could use as an excuse for the mc obtaining hammer tech/space folding utility technology. not that the mc needs such tech anyways as this isn’t some power levelling gamer vr system fantasy world with level one slimes.

  • Free20play
    Free20play2 months ago
    Replied to Tushar_gAnime_fan

    i’m feeling heavy fix fic energy. lets not hope mc’s iq drops below room temperature whenever deku shows up. if the mcs entire thought process could be summed up as being a tool for deku than that’ll be just sad. but i’ve read way too many worm fanfics where this sorta thing happens. idk whats it with western fanfic authors but they usually write their si’s as simps&tools.

  • Free20play
    Free20play2 months ago
    Replied to Free20play

    should add i noticed alot of this in worm fanfics when i used to read them in the past. any fanfic by a western writer seems to reuse these tropes,writing styles which is a hard turn off for me. its why i enjoy eastern fanfics more often as the writers are more pure and you can tell when they actually care about their own fictional settings and aren’t trying to sell you something. oddly enough when i meet a western fanfic that doesn’t do this they’re almost always godtier.