Ywtogy

I also reeled back when I saw you cope out with 3 chapters to describe the movie plot

I really like your story, but the constantly increased reliance on AI editing is getting tiring. at the start of this story I haven't read many AI stories so it wasn't this tiring but the constant AI lingo and structure is getting tiring. the constant one liners in every 2 paragraphs is off putting, what does "signal not summit" really mean?they just keep reminding me that this is an AI story that isn't edited.

I read good bit of the story, I seem a bit confused about it, since this is a fanfic and for fanfic "fans" it just doesn't make sense to have such a heavy dark story, the development seems like tragedies piled on top of each other. the way things are going I wouldn't find it weird if the story ended with the MC commiting suicide. again this an entertainment system novel, it just simply doesn't make since for the super dark development, the author could have had simply gave another setting for such a story since the genre's just don't mesh well. sadly here is where i drop it.

it's sad, I kinda liked the story, it was going somewhere, but the mother's death seemed to be for no reason and the way you explained it in another comment made no sense, your style of the whole story seems to be a tragedy following another tragedy following another one. I'm guessing this is how it's going to be for the rest of the story. hope one day you write another one about the same topic but not so depressing for no reason. again sadly dropped

see what iImean earlier, like it's just a break no need for AI to make it dramatic

AI writing is getting tiring, please don't keep these cringy AI jargon that is the same in every other AI webnovel, it was fun, new, when no one else was doing it but now it's tiring to be reminded that this story is heavily edited by AI

4th time this chapter AI editing is prominent, please use less AI editing/writing it gets boring reading the same sentence in 10 different novels 50 times

date wrong

AI editing, you see it a lot nowadays. it is surprisingly consistent and not in a good way

I enjoyed reading the chapters i have read up to.