Need MORE!!!!

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so far the story is shaping up very promising so we need MORE chapters

you're wrong 60 int will not give 980 but (460 X 2 Ultimate Class Bonus) = 460+60 = 520 * 2 = 1040 not 980

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secondly, the main character is a bit of a fool, he can buy an E rank seed, and make D rank mobs there, hone his Combat strategies there. he has the knowledge of many enemies, with many abilities, in place of this, he takes and drags out of the city, reveals his abilities without honing them + I want to read more about the development of the player, about his experience in creating the game and not bang and 18 days have passed, bang and a month has passed for which they made a resident evil, bang and I went on a mission, but the retelling of games, that's just 90% which honestly disappoints. third, why did he sell the rights and shoot something on them, if the hero himself said that Illusion is worth nothing he could make a film himself, in the right length, with the right effects, and then sell it for a full price!

I don't understand the difference between a developer and a player let's say why a player having 2-3-4-5 mana units, does not create a game, say darts, and put D player in there, the player who developed the game gets mana -> develop mana pool -> goes to E rank or at least 100 mana and voila you have a new developer!

Need More chapter!

Need more chapters!!!

Logic of the Main Hero is somehow wrong, he pumps the predisposition of the elements, spending a tone of chakra back and forth, and 200 -250 chakra should have given a Bonus either to the strength of the chakra, or regen or volume, in any case, some kind of bonus and he spends days and months not using points to save possible time from receiving a bonus

how did he kill the gold rank? being bronze and having, say, 400, Yes, he had an increase there, but not by 10-20 but by 2-4, therefore 400 * 2 * 4 will not be 10k + because he easily killed 2-3 golds, and then went kill dark gold...

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

in the game we are told that the spirit master can live for many 10,000-50,000 years, but in reality we are told that the cultivation itself originated a little less than 1000 years and was guarded, and the Masters themselves, these spirit masters are shown as grandfathers, that actually it doesn’t fit in with the picture of the world, if they are spiriting the masters, then they should be + - young, because each stage increases the duration of life, it is also shown that Yes, there is cultivation. there is power, there are techniques, but you are getting old and everything like an ordinary mortal!

Best of Best, but but please change Alisha's attitude, make her a stupid system, for a smart system that speaks to a billion players, and gives everyone some goodies, this is beyond evil, + spoils the impression of work. the first 50% of the piece were very emotional, and tell the story very well but beyond further errors went 1. Where did the government come from so quickly? 2. why did the mother start calling someone, if she was a doctor, she could understand something herself + where is the doctor's excellence ?! 3. the appearance of Seraphim NPC, what is it all about ?! we have a + - DARK beginning and then some kind of soap opera in the middle and comedy at the end..

if you want to give the heroine quick money, increase the price of silver, make the price of 1 bronze at the beginning with a ransom of 10 silver, the second time again from 1 bronze and a ransom of 100 silver then 1 gold and that's it and raise silver prices 10-100 times thus, you will save the economy of the game in the aisles because 1-20-100 platinum for 3-5 days, even if the entire server worked for 1 person, this is too much, from where there are even so many coins, if money does not fall from the mobs!

novel or not, one must understand that with such a rise in prices, there will be stupid devaluation, when the provision of services will cost billions of gold, because 1 bottle of treatment costs 15 platinum! how much will the blue armor cost then? but epic? there is a wonderful work Lunar sculptor, and there, somehow, the main character does not end up in thousands of gold, this despite the fact that the game at the time of the entrance of the main character is 3 years old, he built a city for 50k gold, here the prices somehow went too quickly into space!