troudenez

ur starting to sound like someone so desperate for stone that u would cheat. ..

author, please be careful with repetitions

repetition.. .

there's a lot of reperition in there

that's a lot of repetition of content.

that's a little hole in the plot ashen didn't 'leave',he was thrown out,so this is not something to be felt as odd or wrong by the villaine,he knew the guy was being fired.if the access to the building not being revoked is the odd part.

yo boss author,do your job a bit more properly and keep track of your own story.you randomly add a zéro to the value of the gold,and it should have been 'landered' when going through the accessory seller...

haha,please be carefull with the storyline.it should be the fort city,not tenesse.

idiot,he could juste bite his tongue to have that drop of blood...

and rhe treasure un the lava,he can grab it now