voidsage3

God i love your story it is so well done please i beg of you never drop this till its completed

While only 3 chapters in its a very good book so far would recommend. Just try to pace his power levels, how much money he earns, ETC. As those seem the biggest pitfalls writes have.

Thats a crazy number

same I've tried alcohol at family gatherings but honestly i really don't like it I rather have a milkshake

Dumbledore did that

oh i reread it it said under his sleeve which means they are using it just not in front of wizards.

im hoping hes changing the verse a bit

Obscures doesn't work that way a child will only become one if they actively hate their magic or something like that. I honestly can't see the MC hating magic.

I just came back cause i saw the new chapter got to say re reading chapter one is still glorious

I like it so far the grammar is good and the story line is good. My only problem is the amount of money he made and how fast he made it my only suggestion would be to retcon it from the 13billion to something like 100mill even that's not that believable but its better than 13 billion dollars.