Primit
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It was 2 chapters ahead yesterday (when I fell for it and subbed without thinking haha), guess they are building up the stockpile. Though still bad to say 5 chapters when it's not. Could also be a copy paste error with the blurb at the bottom of each chapter, though I might be giving them too much benefit of the doubt there.
Lies, I subbed but there's only 2 chapters in advance.
No kidding, Roshi was able to blow up the Moon with a power level of what, 500 or so?... Our MC has a power level of 8,000,000,000,000,000 and 0 training... Pretty sure he's going to sneeze and accidentally crack the planet like an egg.
I would have chosen to start with the Cold Clan. They are probably one of if not THE most powerful race in the universe, with Frieza being almost unbeatable just lazing around, and being able to match Super Saiyan Blue Goku/Vegeta after just four months of training, heck if he trained a bit more to let his new form stabilize rather then rushing off to get revenge he wouldn't have ran out of stamina and would have won. Then there's the whole Black Frieza form he unlocks in the Manga after 10 years of training in a Hyperbolic Time Chamber. That's on top of them being the overlords of a hyper advanced alien empire... Yup, they are definitely the strongest choice.
He might not have been able to afford it, pretty sure it and the Lightning Devil Fruit are basically considered the strongest.
Maybe if your going to do a rank based system, don't tell us the % bonus, Instead of Novice(+5%), Just leave it as Novice. Would look less clustered that way, and also leaves it open for you to power scale skills appropriately as the story progresses, rather then going for a "Hard" system and locking yourself in. Also no need to have all those empty categories just to say "None", no reason to write them in if they are empty.
I mean... it was said way back that when he gave the police a sketch of the killer angel he didn't even try to hide anything and it was basically just a sketch of himself... The MC be all like.
Depends, from memory the "Spider" powers are granted to people chosen by a trans-dimensional entity called "The Weaver", an event such as getting bit by a spider is more of a formality. So it would really depend on if that entity would be interested in our MC... and even if she is, that isn't necessarily a good thing.
*Conceptual Intelligence*
She can lengthen her vine hair as well as control it... Even if physics apply and aren't negated by "Superpower", then all she would need to do is bend her hair and have it resting on the ground or wrap it around a streetlamp or something. That way she could create leverage and redirect weight away from herself.
Well, that's not good. He only got the 1 doctored scan after all.
Pretty sure if you ever lose him you will be dead.... that's kinda the disadvantage to becoming a Jinchuriki.
It's a Feudal society and he's buying a few hundred pounds of metal, not to mention there has to be some formation or something on those weights to have something that heavy be so small. Makes sense it would be pricey I guess.
The novel had the same name as his weapon "The Empyrean Overlord". Sorry that it took me so long to reply haha, for some reason I wasn't sent a notification, only noticed because I randomly looked back through some of my comments.
I mean, he was obviously bad enough at the game that he needed to install VR Cheat Engine.... stands to reason really that he isn't some combat prodigy or something.
Pretty sure it's a reference to a certain novel that no longer exists.... caused a fair bit of controversy in the translation scene. Basically, they claimed they were translating a novel, took donations for bonus chapters and stuff, then when no one could find the novel, doubled down and called everyone liars. Turns out they were the liars and it was an original novel, doesn't really mean much now but this was back before original novels became popular and they ended up dropping the book and basically ghosting out of embarassment. Looking back though, it's a shame.... it was a great novel, just a few years too early.
I'm pretty sure it's a running total, as in it doesn't reset to 0 at each tier, so 99/100 would become 100/200. Which would make sense, it's Qi the same Qi that he uses for techniques, once he reaches the next tier it's not like all the Qi disappears and he becomes mortal.
Now, I'll be the first to admit I haven't read many chapters of this novel, maybe in 20-30 chapters the quality will improve and it will become the best thing since sliced bread..... However, first impressions matter.... and it's bad, what really lets this novel down is the spelling/grammar mistakes and that the author puts no effort into fixing them.... seriously, I get that English isn't your 1st language, but just get Grammarly, it's free.... you can even install it as an add-on for most browsers if you don't want to use their website. As an example, in chapter 1 some guy went through every sentence and put sentence comments in pointing out the mistakes, that was 3 months ago and the mistakes are still there..... So, yeah.... might be a good story, but at the very least I can tell you it's written very poorly.