heli

That was good, did not put a lot of plot holes, shows how mc worked for it, not too much drama love triangle. read to the end. good work

i think it als means divide and conquer, three people working different shifts don't have all the secrets

street rep

that was a thunderclap

continuity is a problem in this book, the ideas are there but i guess putting dem down in ? way that flows with one another is the problem, the mc knows about scp organization? thats ok, but you make it seem he was transported to another world ( scp world) but it was his present world and the scp world is invading his world, is the system in his head or on his system, how did this anomaly begin their appearance in his world.

author keep you head in your book, this people did not know they are called foundation ( they called them secret organization previously which i would say is OK) i dod not think they were told rught?

what!!! ... author is just pushing this.. there is no way going after the girls will not be a blw.

lol... this seems like it came from the soul/ past experience... yes... i remember that MOTH*****er he was told not to do it like that he did not listen now we are all in it..

and Disney tried to spoil it..

wow... i remember this...