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1andonlyMe7mthCommentedSuggest changing "However,..." to "But she..." and link it to the previous paragraph.
However, she would remember it in her heart!- 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
Suggest revising "He does but..." to "He is but...".
"He does but I still need to someone to accompany me. I remember you telling me that you are going to Jingxi City for the charity program for one week. So, I am thinking to ask you to come with me to the party. Can you?" Feng Yue explained. - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
Suggest revising "Why? Does your boyfriend not around?" to "Why? Is your boyfriend not around?".
"Why? Does your boyfriend not around?" Yu Qi asked. - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
Milling? What is milling? Isn't it suppose to be milk?
"Oh! I understand." Yangyang got out of bed and went to the outer room to bring the milling drink to Li Yu. "Mother, Uncle gave me the milling drink. I'll help you with it."detailThe Female Officer Became a Farmer After Getting RebornGeneral · Weekly Sick Cat with Nine Lives - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
xry? cry.
When Madam Gong and the others, who were waiting outside, heard Li Yu's painful xry, their hearts ached as they wiped their tears. Zhizi grabbed Xiaoyu's hand with a pale face. "Xiaoyu, Madam is so pitiful. I don't want to have a child anymore."detailThe Female Officer Became a Farmer After Getting RebornGeneral · Weekly Sick Cat with Nine Lives - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
Yu Qi was feeling too well? Yu Qi wasn't feeling too well.
Seeing Yu Qi was crowded by people like that and saw that Yu Qi was feeling too well, Long Hui stepped forward to help his fiancee. - 1andonlyMe8mthReplied to animelover1477
He should divorce her right away but take back all the dowry. Just give back her dowry and compensate her with money that equivalent to half a year time that she spent as his wife. And yeah, once they have a kid, he will be in the worst misery. Get rid of this kind of gold digger, users and insatiable family before it too late.
Ch 461 Medical Hall, The Worrisome Mother-in-lawdetailThe Female Officer Became a Farmer After Getting RebornGeneral · Weekly Sick Cat with Nine Lives - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
Many of your forces? Many of other forces.
After that, Lin's Hospital's prestige was gradually established, and its reputation exploded. Many of your forces began to be interested in Lin Yuelan, the disciple of Miracle Doctor Wu Yazi. - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
Suggest revising "... I's a little painful She'll be fine in a while." to "... It's a little painful but she'll be fine in a while."
Xiaoyu was stunned for a moment. She smiled and comforted him. "Young Master is worried that Madam will have a younger brother in pain! I's a little painful. She'll be fine in a while."detailThe Female Officer Became a Farmer After Getting RebornGeneral · Weekly Sick Cat with Nine Lives - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
He;s? He's.
Seven Pounds looked disgusted. "It's a brother. He's so ugly! He;s even uglier than Xiao Bai. Madam, I couldn't bring my Xiao Hua over. Where's Young Master's Xiao Bai?"detailThe Female Officer Became a Farmer After Getting RebornGeneral · Weekly Sick Cat with Nine Lives - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
extremely jealous? Suggest revising to extremely angry or regret..
Steamed Bun Liu looked at his daughter's gray hair and blamed himself. He was extremely jealous. "Lian'er, it's not your fault. It's my fault for not guarding you well and causing you to suffer."detailThe Female Officer Became a Farmer After Getting RebornGeneral · Weekly Sick Cat with Nine Lives - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
He was ruthless? Please change he to she.
Jiang Yunfeng nodded." That's right. In the past, she did not show any weakness when she targeted Zhengguo Duke's Estate. He was ruthless, domineering, and fierce. It was impossible for such a woman not to have a few of her own people in the General's Estate. How could she not know about such a rumor? The ordinary people outside might believe it, but to us, hmph…" - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
Hhost? host.
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Suggest revising "Hmm... I don't think so..." to "Hmm... She is fine..."
"Hmm... I don't think so. Her voice is clear not shaking or anything." Neko-chan answered. - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
Suggest revising "Does she injured?" to "Is she okay?".
"Is she okay? Does she injured?" Long Hui asked Neko-chan. - 1andonlyMe8mthCommented
her place? Suggest revising "her place" to "her plan".
"Hmm... Master wanted to go to their place. She hopes you don't ruin her place." Neko-chan glanced at the bodyguards. - 1andonlyMe8mthCommentedCh 81 Sensing Murderous Intent
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Suggest revising "Now, let's him..." to "For now, let's him...".
Wen Yujing's eyes flashed with malice as she said with a fierce expression," Hmph, the higher you stand, the harder you fall! Now, let's let him be smug!" Then, she said to the siblings," You can go out now. Call the butler over!" - 1andonlyMe9mthReplied to PrettyBebe14Ch 417 You Have to Support MedetailThe Female Officer Became a Farmer After Getting RebornGeneral · Weekly Sick Cat with Nine Lives