that's absolutely hilarious! get 'em girl!

damn! that's the first time people died in the field with sky🥺

I am so excited! your story and references are awesome! the way u describe a scene, is like you are actually there! it's morbid, hilarious, sexy, action packed, and the detail with weapons is very impressive. skål to you!

that was intense! I can't wait to read about more crazy things

wow that's the seed for nightmares. it would be so hard to do that. crazy chapter, but still really great on the horror aspect.

hahahaha! **** yes!!

wow! that was crazy! thank you for such a fantastically gross chapter! it reminds me of the bloater from the game left 4 dead, but way worse

just saying from personal experience, kids with a purpose are scary. if they all are chasing you, IT IS like a bunch of zombies chasing you. crazy energetic ones, that seem to never tire out..

I love this! that's what I do to my kids! if I want them to do something they may not like, I just make a game of it!! it works everytime

WOW! it's gonna get WAY more intense! I absolutely love your story!

thank you for the episode!

Aww man!! Talk about a great boss battle

I have a feeling its gonna get way more intense. Awesome job with the suspense

I'm glad he was honest about it. You dont always have to be proud of what you have done, inorder to do the right thing...if that makes sense lol

Oh this just gets more intense

I hope he doesn't get infected from his cuts!

Oh my gods this is intense! I love the thrill behind it!

Wow! this story really keeps you on the edge of your seat! I love it so far great job!

Wow way to start it off with a BANG! I'm looking forward too what happens

I agree so much! amazing way of explaining it