See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I need more

I tried but I cant read this anymore... story is great but I wish there would be someone to rewrite this whole thing... its a mess..........

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

this story is great keep at it whenever you can I will be waiting and as they say... take my spirit stone author!

it is pretty bad, i like the idea but everything seems so rushed and its all over the place. Maybe try rewritting it? check what you can add to the story to make it flow better cause im stopping here

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

please stop showing the whole status and show only updates, or at this point youll end up with a chapter only being the status and its not very interesting

am I the only one that is having a super hard time reading this? I will stop reqding this now because its not interesting, but every chapter is a headache for me, try to get better at the translation or something cause this feel like it just came out of google translate

i see all these comments but not enough vote!!! I sacrifice my entire daily saving for gods work

ahhhhhh fuuuuuuuu I wish to be etheral through space and time so I can watch more 🙏

why do I find this story on such a cliff, please author more or I will die of anticipation if u don't 😭

tbh I would wait a few days if you can come up with more than that, I moght just stop reading for now then come back like in a month to get at least this fight done xD

I am gonna stop reading this, just because of the writing quality... everything else was ok but i'm getting more and more mad reading this... look up an editor or get better at english and im sure your story will get more views and review