SoulOfDragon

Premier league goals

+1

Thanks for the chapter! I really appreciate you not leaving us hanging for a week without a heads-up.

After years of reading novels and fanfics, it's really hard to find something that catches my attention and doesn't lose quality after the premise. Stories that I could read for days at the beginning are now things I wouldn't touch with a ten-foot pole, so this story started well and didn't use a system to restrict what should appear as a manga. This is a big plus for me, and the protagonist and secondary characters are well defined and do not appear as Character A, B, and C. The reason Miyu wants to show the manga to her sister is explained and makes sense; it's not because she wants to help someone she doesn't know, but simply to feel good, in an understanding way, about the protagonist's failure to pass something she had to work hard for. Overall, I give it a 5, but I'm really afraid of a drop or hiatus, as this is increasingly common on this site.v

The MYTH

Of course. My childhood...

Read for a while but couldn’t maintain my engagement with the story. The premise is good and the progression makes sense while trying to show how the MC is developing mentally but the story itself looks more like a diary with 50% of the chapter with system stats or missions. Needs more descriptions of the game and the dialogs could use some work.