Beniiboy23

After many chineesee fica i have just one sentence :D licking dog :D kills anyone moment meets main cast he miracously not xdd trash

Op in dodging ^^ boring...

I dont like other alteregos...otherwise great story

Clones are really outtadet....can puke when any story has them...(expect naruto)

Thanks god i didnt start reading it :D

At this point just every cliche happened... :D gets boring real quick

Ye cai doesnt shot because thiis ecause thaat :D great character really..:D at least stay with hella then.. :D kniw its mtljust stating facts

Its good , but at this pace its 3ch a month...no hope for fic

Trash their pride :D make it so that the training they done seems like waste of time :D show them that whitout sacred gear they are nothing :D he has to anyway fight them cause draig and tiamat has to renaunce their titles :D if you take away their powers that they think its theirs you can make them despair a bit and make their so called value dropp drastically in the eyes of the supernatural so that their pride shatters that fits punishment :D in line with the character :D later you can unseal or give them their gears back :D

Boring..... .