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babysaya2yrPosted[img=recommend] Mais caps por favooooorrr e continue com um otimo trabalho---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
- babysaya2yrReplied to godking_leviathan
I never thought about it, but it's an interesting idea.
As a young man now 18 years old, and after thanking and saying goodbye to my new family, it was time to leave. I need to learn more about my hellfire, although I can give him basic commands, I still feel like there's more, like I just scratched at the simplest and stupidest of his skills, and could get things beyond my wildest imaginings when I learned to truly use it. - babysaya2yrReplied to OukisLips
- babysaya2yrReplied to OukisLips
Read all the chapters before saying that I ruined something, even because it is my beloved fic, and I am developing it. Besides, I can't spoil it if I'm doing something as I like it. For me, it's perfect and makes me happy.
Chapter 08 - Towards 'Braavos' (a fat cat) - babysaya2yrReplied to OukisLipsCh 6 Chapter 06 — Ritual
- babysaya2yrReplied to MrMikeCh 8 Chapter 08 - Leaving
- babysaya2yrReplied to arno_victor_dorien
For the greater good, I chose not to involve Lord Dumbledore.
'' I have a feeling he could kill me and the whole guard before we could even react and that without him even addressing me, my lord, just looking at him gave me such a feeling. (Jory)'' - babysaya2yrReplied to ROMAN_EAGLE
bye
Little did master and disciple know, that although the cat before them was not exactly a demon, it would make them both hell and make their lives miserable and at times make Jon wish to go back in time and cast a curse on the old man, for teaching him such a ''little ritual''. But that's a story for the future. - babysaya2yrReplied to ObamaUchiha
bye
Who are these four monsters, forget the two behind, this old man makes me shiver just standing still and this beautiful lady is so beautiful. Even more so with that sadistic expression and murderous intent so intense. My heart is beating faster. I think this is love. - babysaya2yrReplied to OukisLips
A little grammatical error, due to English not being my original language, besides I don't like smelly characters very much, so Jon and his companions have a habit of washing themselves frequently.
At noon Jon, sweaty and exhausted from all his morning training with Ser Rodrick, returns to the castle, where he takes a quick shower and heads to the kitchen to grab something to eat, before starting his afternoon classes with Maester Luwin. - babysaya2yrReplied to Northeast
Thank you very much, I will be correcting the chapter. Keep giving me tips, so I can improve my writing. And thank you very much for the comment.
This paragraph has been deleted. - babysaya2yrReplied to MrMikeCh 4 Chapter 04 - Meeting
- babysaya2yrReplied to Darth_siriCh 2 Chapter 02 - Revenge
- babysaya2yrReplied to MrMikeCh 6 Chapter 06 - Training
- babysaya2yrReplied to Thatone1guy
Thanks for the tips, English is not my source language, so these tips are always welcome to help me improve.
As I watch the creature, it suddenly seems to lose interest in waiting for men to attack each other. Moving at a speed that should have been impossible given its size. The creature appears in front of the lowest of the three men, moving its right arm it hits him in the chest, throwing the poor man towards me, moving me slightly to the right I prevent the body from colliding with me, so it hits a small rock in my direct, but no sound leaves your mouth.