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codmuri2yrCommentedThe chapter isn't confusing because of the part about the past (I think it's actually quite clear), however you change the name of the characters too many times (Anna become Kanna, Ma-Ri is changed to Mi-Ra then to Mira), stick to one name only. Ps: tone down the exposition, the last paragraph is not natural at all.
Ch 42 Resurfacing- codmuri2yrCommented
I think he shouldn't be. He should be the manager (he has experience) and sometimes appear in streams but that's all. He don't strike as someone that would enjoy playing games while talking with the audience. He may do well in the "just chatting" category though. Anyway, I don't watch hololive but i enjoy your story, thanks for the chapter
Ch 26 Entry 20 - Invitation (Kyrell) - codmuri2yrCommented
GoodTimesWithScar want to know your location
He thought Minecraft would just be a fun game for people, but finding out that wheelchair users could freely walk around here would probably be of great help for those people in the future. - codmuri2yrCommented
I would have say that they have the images of the arson, but then I remembered, they don't, because they are as far apart from their brains as Alpha Centaurus is from the Earth. It may seem close, but when you look closely at it, you understand no connection can exist
The Director was a beast, he took a huge loss with it, and there was the case of Amon Tang that was not resolved. He now regrets having postponed it, after all, he wasn't a fool, he can guess that whoever did this was the culprit who wanted to frame Amon. However, now it's all burned. - codmuri2yrCommented
No. Just, no. You will NOT make me believe that in a world where one can manipulate ELEMENTS, no protection against criminal attacks would be put in place. Plus, did they seriously don't have backups of the videos? Not necessarily backup of the entire system, but backup of the day someone created a rumor that could have resulted in the expulsion of a student? Even if only for convenience purpose? Like being able to show images to the students and professors? Not even for that? okay then... I feel like the universe is at play here. Oh... wait....
Soon they went out to see, and found that the surveillance room caught fire and everyone started to evacuate while those who could use water genetics helped put out the fire. All data from the security cameras, along with other things were lost. - codmuri2yrCommented
I think every protest movement out there want to know how to do this (being a riot)
I can't help but get a little angry. Especially seeing this pompous bastard walk into the arena with his hands in his pockets. Who does he think he is? Tsk, what a riot! - codmuri2yrReplied to codmuri
broken as this
"We're in the finals!" The referee shouted with excitement: "I know that many are discouraged by the withdrawals from the fight, but now the 10 finalists have been decided. Keep an eye on the screen that will show the table of the ten finalists." - codmuri2yrCommented
this is more than stupid. 10 people make it to the finals and you make the finals with only 2 win -> only 20 matches are enough to qualify everyone needed. BUT that is unlikely to happen, so let's say there are 4 classes (likely more) of 30 people (again, likely more), that make 120 students. Let's say there were 35 matches before the finals with 2 fighters each time, that is at most 60 people (10 finalist and 20 to fight them (20 fight), and 30 (15 fight) to complete the roaster(20+15=35, math checks out)) fighting. This means that as a student you have a 50% chance of not making it to the finals, not because you didn't win twice, BUT BECAUSE YOU WERE NOT SELECTED EVEN ONCE. HOW CAN A SCHOOL AGREE TO MAKE A TOURNAMENT WITH A SYSTEM AS BROKEN AS THIS?
"We're in the finals!" The referee shouted with excitement: "I know that many are discouraged by the withdrawals from the fight, but now the 10 finalists have been decided. Keep an eye on the screen that will show the table of the ten finalists." - codmuri2yrCommented
how does this tournament even work.... it doesn't make any sens
"Well, with that Elijah Ferreira has 2 wins and goes to the finals." The referee said. - codmuri2yrCommented
"Which makes it a treasure for the Platinum continent. And that's why I'm telling you, so you can blabber about it to the rest of the school"
The director continued: "Student Amon is not only above level 20. He also has a special genetic block, in addition to the normal one. His case is very special, he can have two genetic unlocks at the same time, even though he is only on the first genetic unlock. Which makes it a treasure for the Platinum Continent." - codmuri2yrReplied to ferferfer2
Basically, "Do god exist?" 3 options: "Yes" = theism; "No" = atheism; "I don't know" = agnostic
This book has been deleted. - codmuri2yrReplied to SupremeCookie
that was my idea yes
Hold on a minute, am I addicted to being in the water after two weeks of continuous diving? - codmuri2yrCommentedCh 66 Chapter 66: Home
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*An old man in a wheelchair approaches him* "Hello Per- Fuutarou, do you believe in gods?"
Hold on a minute, am I addicted to being in the water after two weeks of continuous diving? - codmuri2yrReplied to SpicySlimey
few, because I can't stand the hypocrisy of most Chinese MC
{A/N: If you haven't guessed Jean is my top contender for the love interest. I thought of others but in the end Jean just feels right but hey that's just me. So anyway someone asked why Mikael couldn't just reach out and crush Kilgrave from across the city, the answer should be explained now. Yes Mikael could do it, however in his current state he is likely to crush the entire block in the process. Right now defensive and augmentation abilities are his safest abilities until he can readjust to his sudden power increase. Will it take long? Probably not, but it will still take some work. Which is also why Jean is introduced here. Two people adjusting to their own sudden power ups together. - codmuri2yrReplied to Crusader8405
flat is justice, medium is premium, bigger is better?
Okay, stop. No fantasizing about real people. You have plenty of material for that at home. You have to protect the cute not lewd it. Well, that's certainly hard when in front of a beauty with like 160cm in height and a decent chest… Again! Fuck! Cute girls are just too strong! Clear thoughts…」 - codmuri2yrCommented
Does someone disagree with this statement?
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But, but! that how a young master should act!
"I see. I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Li Huang." I just now remembered that I don't know their name. Well, I could have asked them sooner but in my defense, I couldn't bring myself to start the conversation with 'you there, what is your name?' so this is for the best. - codmuri2yrCommented
"this time". Did he come back in time from when she was killed or is he such a stalker that he doesn't understand that she didn't need his help during the battle royale?
But there was something that stopped him from doing so. He wanted to fight Li Huang but he also wanted to make sure to be there for Lai Xinyue this time. - codmuri2yrCommented
I'm gonna like comment if I want and there is nothing you can do
To the guys from the future: don't waste your time liking the comments about pacing, I don't think I will come back to this and even if I do, the result is already in action so there is no point to it. Read more and get up to date with the novel so that your opinion would have an effect.)