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PointAndFail1mthCommentedI can hear the song in my head now...
"You can do it too! You can do it too! Let's train muscles, me and you!" Alex finished with a double bicep and a side chest.- PointAndFail1mthCommented
All I can add to what many people have already said is that you might want to look into Overlord and The Eminence in Shadow. Two animes that show what you can do when you have an overpowered protagonist. (Ok if you dont want to look into them I can give you my take. Have interesting side characters and give them good development. And then just make sure to make fights cool when the MC fights and inevitably wins. Overlord, One Punch Man and The Eminence in Shadows all generally do something along these lines and they are well received. Well it is a lot more nuanced than this but I think most people will be happy with just this)
Ch 17 Putting Talents to use - PointAndFail6mthCommented
The pacing is exceptional. Most of the time, sports novels (or fanfics) drag on and on, being very repetitive. It's good that you were unafraid of summarising a lot of matches as they eventually become, "How many different ways can you score/ Someone does something in a match" for a few hundred chapters. There were points in the story where I was confused what was going on (I think it was probably the English) but I could not stop reading. All the free time I had was spent reading until I had reached the final chapter. It really feels like the whole story was planned from beginning to end, which in most cases, makes for a compelling story. You knew the kind of story you wanted to tell and the content for each volume. I kind of wished more stories were like this and less wish fufilment and more realistic. If I had to say what I felt is missing from this story, I really want to know what the Main Character is doing after he retired. What are his children doing? What about the sports clubs he invested in? I cannot help but want to find out what happened there. Anyways, great work! If you do write another story, I will be sure to pick it up.
Ch 198 Afterword - PointAndFail1yrReplied to Asharzal
Maybe ultrasound scan lol
"Her application said Mutation, and she's been invisible since birth," Nezu says. "Perhaps it was wrong, but you'll find out soon enough." - PointAndFail1yrReplied to Rafi_Mohd
oh so if he changes it so that his whole body absorbs the essence, his spirit will be his whole body i guess?
Lin Fan was very surprised by his father's Spirit, because these Spirit Bones must have very high potential! - PointAndFail1yrCommented…Yet they can't even defeat the new World Boss yet.
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High elimination rate... The Elite 10... Isn't this just Totsuki Academy from Shoukugeki no Souma
"More importantly, the Ten Masters of Mountain and Sea Committee formed by the Ten Masters of Mountain and Sea is a unique executive body directly subordinate to the dean. According to the rank of the 10 seats, they enjoy various varying degrees of privileges, and are even able to influence many things related to the operation of the academy! - PointAndFail2yrReplied to Syrose
beetle did not evolve. only learnt a skill
Not to mention that he had already contracted two Gold-rank spirit beasts.detailI Let You Manage the Beast Taming Arena, Now Everyone Became Divine Beasts?Fantasy · Iced Cola - PointAndFail2yrCommented
One eternity later...
He walked to the center and sat there, waiting for the sky to turn dark.detailMy Girlfriend From Turquoise Pond Requests My Help After My Millennium SeclusionEastern · Red Pepper Afraid Of Spicy - PointAndFail2yrReplied to Matthias_Schmidt
From google translate: At this time, in the midst of the harvest, he also has to sigh with emotion.
He thought about the long way he came to arrive here. 此时的他,在收获满满当中,也有感慨. - PointAndFail2yrReplied to Flirt48
if im not wrong, it has the same meaning as the sentence before so...
Once they appeared, it was the same old trick again. 而它们一出现,就是故技重施. - PointAndFail2yrCommented
I'm surprised that them being sons of zeus is more important than them being members of the 12 olympians
Jerry was stunned. Hermes? Dionysus? ! Weren't they sons of Zeus?! - PointAndFail2yrReplied to FennrrirX
Immense pain or stat stonks. But if you're an American I completely understand. Have a nice day.
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Oh, is that the Neo Armstrong Cyclone Jet Armstrong Cannon? It looks very alike!
This was the legendary air cannon. - PointAndFail3yrCommented
In Fate, EX is just a level higher than A. Maybe better to say that the stat is so high, it can't really be compared to lower levels but oh well. And I might be wrong since I'm not the biggest expert on Fate
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Anime is called Overly cautious hero
"AH! Forget it, I'll just do it. If I die, I die." Lin Wu spoke in a helpless tone. - PointAndFail3yrCommented
Oh wow. Let me guess, for the chuunin exams, Haku and Yuuna will be on the same team... and maybe Sai? Ngl I feel amazed since I haven't seen something like this in awhile.
This actually DID get Hiruzen interested. If it was something that could help Konoha as a whole, he didn't mind overlooking a single suspicious report. If the one who wanted to enter Konoha was Zabuza, things might be different, but Haku wasn't wanted like Zabuza, so things were less complicated. - PointAndFail3yrCommented
Just because you're correct doesn't mean you're right.
"Just because you have never heard of something before, doesn't mean it doesn't exist." - PointAndFail3yrReplied to Chopstiksman
Gay Bulge!!!
"Ice Make: Gae Bolg!" - PointAndFail3yrCommented
He should uhm... stop punching the wall
Yu Long quietly took a stance and then put his weight toward his fist and punched toward the wall.