English is my second language.. so agree with you. this novel needs a lot of editing. I'm trying to contemplate more on the grammar. really sometimes I really need to analyzed what the translator wants to convey..

with everything happening.. I think I need to stop reading this novel for a month so I can accumulate lots of chapters ☺

I want to see how peter handle nz interrogation

H.S on this side knew something already about the other side. But I still got some guts that The ace of the far east is the HS from the other side.

Father and Daughter Duo.. can't wait how general He and QIn fall into the hands of Nianzhi. this is getting exciting. more mysteries to unfold!!

waaaahhhh. is he going to reveal himself? can't wait for another chapter.. this is getting exciting!!!.

when will father GU exposed himself to GN? is Father Gu really the culprit of suwen death?,I think it has something to do with Qin Y. the crazy lunatic madwoman ..

I remember the xray of Chen to Nianzi and I believed its her mother who did that and Father GU rescued her for being a rat lab by her mother.

mmmm seems like there's gonna be a battle between HS & HZ.. and it seems like HS is the real H.S. darnnnn.. I need a mass released

what a perfect plot.. she will go to Lu.. can't wait for the next chapter

mmmm.. this is my thought HS - is the real HS from outside world.. Lu Jin - is the GU xiangwen He ze Chu - will help HS and GN to travel back to the other side. no one knows the true face of the HS in this world, and remember theres a big explosion in in Russia where HS tried to tracked down GN and the abductors mark. and he almost fell on that explosion in Siberia.. maybe just maybe song Jinning had a breakthrough on the magnetic field.

why do I have this feeling that Peter is the exact Major Hou who transported from the other side

oh no .. I think the Huo shao in this world will protect nanzi together with father Lion.