DaylithNight
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DaylithNight2yrCommentedCh 291 The Attack- DaylithNight2yrCommentedCh 117 Radiations
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I can feel your desire to get to the fighting parts. It comes out in the little bits of forshadowing you have sprinkled throughout the last few chapters. Its moving a little slow at the moment, but in a good way that builds depth and foundation so that the more action oriented scenes that come later have something worth while to support them. Plus I have to go back to the forshadowing....... It really builds my anticipation for what I am sure will be epic đ
Author's notes: Part of me feels that this is too slow, but maybe my desire to reach the fighting parts is affecting my judgment. I don't think I can accelerate the pace without neglecting important details, and I want to avoid that. Still, let me know what you think. - DaylithNight2yrCommented
Why were they in the slums at the time of the crash if they were only forced to move there due to the cost of his treatment?
Khan couldn't feel any anger toward his father. He knew how much Bret had sacrificed to keep him alive. They previously lived past the quarters of the Global Army, inside the bustling core of Ylaco. Yet, they had been forced to move in the Slums due to the expenses for his treatment. - DaylithNight2yrCommentedCh 1064 Jester
- DaylithNight3yrCommentedCh 273 Perfect Lightning Bolt
- DaylithNight3yrCommentedCh 129 Chapter 129 Plague Woods
- DaylithNight3yrCommentedCh 805 Divine Spirit
- DaylithNight3yrCommentedCh 80 The Green Tea Bitch