Timeline wise I dont think dan is dead yet or her younger brother at least right... which means she doesnt have a fear of blood yet

Not sure what mtls you're using but if you pop in the raws to chatgpt. you'll likely get a better base to edit vs standard mtls

Misleading doesn't mean it isn't true just that the premise of this review is incomplete and implies pemanence in memory loss.

is there a reason to continue this if hes just going to be akainu with better justification over the same actions he did in canon

Not really this review implied that he lost his memories completely and made the mc "braindead" I can't say for certain the author changed anything after seeing feedback since i was't readin then but comment suggests he dropped 4 chapters from 25 which implies it was all planned and it does seem planned in the sense that was the only way for the story to go(best i can explain without spoilers)

While I was engrossed in the story at the start.. I'm losing interest since Naruto easily outs himself to various characters and then they take advantage of his abilities and skills he constantly reveals to them. He doesn't really act sneakily or as the synopsis or namesake would have you think. He's so "understanding" of these characters who originally forsook or barely did anything for him until he started showing value(which he easily reveals to them even along wifh the fact that he could careless about the village and would leave if he could). That being said the writing quality is good and the world background seems solid for a naruto fanfic.

This is a misleading review that led me to not read this story for a while.... SPOILER AHEAD....…........He temporarily loses his memories and gains it back a few chapters later. It is by all accounts still a reincarnation fanfic and quite good one at that so far. This review should honestly be removed and reported

cid from eminence in shadow

Don't wish to be all too negative since I can see the potential of this story.. I even bulk bought all the chapters. Is there a reason the author hasn't editted or made corrections that others have commented on? All I can see is the other liking comments, but no correction has been made. When something like this happens it leaves a bad taste in the mouth of readers like me who wish to support the author and work, but are now unsure if the author has a vested interest in maintaining quality in work and are instead just pumping out chapters for monetary reasons. Maybe the quality increases later on.. I hope so, but I felt the need to voice my opinion and feelings after being this deep in the story and still noticing these issues. Thanks

Citizens of Dalaran! Raise your eyes to the skies and observe! Today our world's destruction has been averted in defiance of our very makers! Algalon the Observer, Herald of the Titans, has been defeated by our brave comrades in the depths of the Titan City of Ulduar. Algalon was sent here to judge the fate of our world. He found a planet who's races had deviated from the titan's blueprints. A planet where not everything had gone to plan. Cold logic deemed our world not worth saving. Cold logic, however, does not account for the power of free will. It's up to each of us to prove that this world is worth saving. That our lives ... are worth living.

dang starting off with 2 rings

Salamence

As a follow up.. sometimes chatgpt will skip over a paragraph(or maybe its the raws im using?), Anyway if someone wanted to become a "translator", Using chatgpt then editting some things to correct localizations(like Lao --> Elder or Big Senior --> Eldest) would produce translation better than average on this website. Assuming paragraphs get skipped over from chatgpt just pop it in google translate and compare/edit that specific paragraph lol.

"Big Senior Brother looked dignified, exuding a compelling presence. "I'm Zang Wei. You can call me Big Senior Brother. From now on, I'll teach you the basics. Every three days in the morning at this time, I'll personally instruct you for an hour. After three times, I'll have a unified guidance every seven days, and you'll join others to listen. Any questions?"" -chatgpt. So looks like its not personal guidance after 3 times.

"The man, about seventeen or eighteen years old, had a thin layer of fuzz above his lips, and his body was very strong, filling out a gray short jacket." - chatgpt

"Wen Lao, why didn't we see the Tiger Character Courtyard?" -chat gpt