chrnocross

a says this, b says this, description about environment or about what a is or isnt, b follows up in 3 separate short flat sentences. Rinse and repeat, that's AI in a nutshell. Authorsan u gotta edit and translate ai more mang, your idea is solid for a story just execution is a bit lazy with unedited ai prompts(or not enough prompts to make it not bogstandard ai)

Yeah mc is fine but other chars so far have the cadence and flat tone of AI. While the jedi themselves probably strive for that they are, or at least the younger generation here would be more happy go lucky

lucaeio