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He was disappointed shanks didn't want to chase after the one piece
he got that a long time ago tho when still in Roger's crew
Don't want to review but i hope you read this author. The story was fi e honestly until he attends school. After that the flow isn't there anymore between chapters and a lot of the plot and dialogue just seem forced for the sake of reaching some storypoint(maybe to reference cobra Kai series more rather than diverge more). The whole bully and Devon scenes at the start of school seems out of place and especially forced. it sucks because there was indeed potential imo but after 5 consecutive chapters of the dip in quality I'm afraid I'll have to drop.
not sure if still being edited but the future chapters on their website( have to pay a bit to access ) took a serious dip in quality and mc name keeps constantly changing