Oh happy days, I just read a chapter from another novel I liked that just introduced a super cringey an forced ship between MC and Hela, to come over to this novel and be meet with the classy "psychotic-tsundere" forced matchup scenario becuase of a misunderstanding with the MC. Must be my lucky day......sigh
The novel went from mildly satisfying and interesting, to just boredom and frustration after the time skip. I'll stop now. Good luck out here author. From the first part of the novel I could see you were having fun and it was interesting to read. After the time skip and Authors long absence, seems the magic is gone.
The problem is that it's been 59 chapters of people wondering when the transition part of novel is over and we can get to something Interesting. Have you read his other work? Read 60 chapters of that and compare to this. I love F.O. Universe 1000% more then witcher, but this novel is CRAWLING and definitely lackluster compared to his other work.
Wait, so 1600 b.c is the start of time? There was no civilization before them? No ancient Egyptians? Sumerian? None of the other cultures that are known? Only thing i can think of is that this "earth" is completely removed from reality and is the Greek pantheons interpretation of the beginning of time. To be Frank, I had to stop reading after this chapter. Nothing against your novel (in fact i like the premise and your writing skill is definitely above average) I just got a serious pet-peeve about the MC being wrapped up in nonsensical misunderstandings.
Is author unaware that the Greek were quite skilled in minting their own currency? They have seen coins before, from multiple societies. Why would a quarter make people lose their mind? The detail in the metal? Sure it's impressive, but the first person to see the money doesnt think he's royalty or an emissary from the gods or some bull$hit. No, he's obviously a murdering witch trying to pay for his food with a severed metallic head. The firstperson was amazed simply because of his clothes and then the stall owner believes he's a murdering blasphemer witch because his coin looks too detailed? Kinda insulting to ancient greeks.
Uhhhhhhhh ok? I guess a "realistic" medical soap opera, and the marvel cinematic universe with a dash of fantasy ninja spice, could go together...... I am hoping that this is just to add a little flavor to the side characters and the medical soap opera wont bleed into the main story too much (if at all).
But remember everyone, this is a world he's walking into where he knows NOTHING about it. He knowledge of the F.O univese is "enclave bad - brotherhood good" and that's it. I still wonder why the author even needed to have a transmigration plot? (A little tired of a premise ESPECIALLY if your not going to use past skills or knowledge of the MC to alter the story) Why not an original non-migrated MC that can think for himself so he isn't brainwashed? Everything would be the same.
He wants to master his empathy power by going to the spirit world? Is it because the incredibly obvious shady cat told him so? I think it was mentioned in the last chapter that the MC was unsure of why he wants to go to the spirit world. Was it the "challenge" or adventure or whatever he said. He acting like he's seen the whole world already, or that he's a world renown villain that needs to hide in the spirit world an cant ever show his face. Like I said before, he knows enough about the world to know that entering the spirit World is INCREDIBLY dangerous whether in spirit or physical. But He cant possibly think about anything else now, a creepy/suspicious spirit cat he met twice told him to?
Why is the MC staring every 5th sentence with "shishishishi..." all of a sudden? Is that his laugh? Is this the first chapter the MC has laughed? He even laughs normally with "hahaha.." in this same chapter? When I hear that "shishi" laugh, in my head it's some snotty nose, silk pants, punk thinking up some scheme while rubbing his hands together. And if it's how luffy laughs in the manga/anime, all the more reason you shouldn't use it. It does not fit this character.
I'm sure it's there, it just the MC is lvl 1 still. What has he done to gain experience? Hacked his dads computer once, that's 10xp. Has he killed anything? Not that I remember. Dosen't look like speech checks will be a thing, so thats out. Discovering new places? I think we both know the answer to that. This story is CRAWLING in the MCs adolescence, It wasn't this way with reima. On a side note, why did this MC have to be reincarnated? He played F.O.3 but didnt pay attention or care, then gets shoved into new Vegas game? Was it just so the MC wouldn't be brainwashed?
There was absolutely no chance he wasn't going to be OP with his power set and starting location. That's just something that comes with an insane open ended cheat like our MC got. I would like to see higher stakes in the story, but please dont make the same mistake many authors do by having him meet/get spanked by the living tribunal or beyonders or something crazy so you can introduce some t.ension. Been living it so far, even with the abrupt world change.