CosmicWifi

If we replace the main character with a lamp nothing changes from the story. Why write a fanfiction or translate one that changes nothing in the main story?

It will be more like "woops it didn't work. It is good that thing wasn't usefull at all. Else the main turning points of the story changes. No one like changes right? It is also better let them die anyway." Why would this fanfiction changes something while it didn't for whole 66 chapters.

If after all that build up, ends without destruction of magic council (including their life) there won't be a reason to read this ff. Atleast for me. I am writing this because author ends the chapter with a clifhanger.

There are so many system novels and %99 are lazy writing, forced plot, forced power up etc. Most of the characters are useless individuals that where they are now is just help of the system. With system instead of steady growth of character, we see random numbers, I did "X" thing this "Y" and pleased the system so I got this random power or stupid points to give me totally random power up. For example MC sees someone cast a spell and says system I want to learn it. Let me pay you and I got it. Let me give extra points that I save to max it out. For many people (like me) this is a bad writing. If authors want to talented MC, he or she could see the way of the casting of the spell, understand its requirements to how to cast it and do it in a single or a second try. This way we see MC is talented in magic, not rich in system points. Second worst part of the system is that it's power can be out of the story's norm. One of the system with Star Wars fanfiction, MC can create lifeforms, summon people, cleanse corrupted planet, use system setting to block force detection to hide the planet. MC is not even master jedi which is still pushing too far. All in all having god like power of system feels meaningless. Even less than absurd power fantasy. Why not make MC just a god with unique limitations or just a god of something.

The moment I read this I got notification. My notification sound is echoing sound of Renoir's entrance at the end of arc 1. That was dramatic.

I am so early that even the app make a mistake saying 57 is the last chapter. Thanks for the chapter.

I believe "in public" means when other individuals around.

What I understand from the lore, they run. Because they quiet frickingly fast. Rangiku is fast enough to dodge something fast as speed of light. We saw it from when Aizen, Tousen and Gin are run away with help of hollow.

Use lady. I really tired seeing japanese words in an english writings/fanfiction.

Why do you even write a fanfic with gamer ability if you are going it to nerf it to the ground? All that numbers yet they don't feel like worth a thing. Just like empty promises.Just create any other system power. This is just... sad and dissapointing. I am not even talking about forced plot.