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DirtyDaoist

DirtyDaoist

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2018-02-03 JoinedUnited States
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist5mth
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    The MC's Int stat is not properly reflected with his actions and thought process...

    "So someone actually want me dead. Motherfuckers!" I exclaimed, my frustration evident as I slammed my hand onto the desk. It was a natural reaction – anyone would be enraged if they found out they were a target of such malicious intent. But the burning question remained: who could it be?
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    Neurolink System in the Modern World
    Urban · InnocentFox
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Servant Vaan
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    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Servant Vaan
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    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Servant Vaan
    altalt
    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Servant Vaan
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    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Servant Vaan
    altalt
    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Servant Vaan
    altalt
    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

    Ch 1 A new beginning
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    The rise of the pervert primordial
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Strongest Mage with the Lust system
    Fantasy · Blizzard54k
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Wei Wuyin
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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern · KevinAscending
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

    Ch 1 Servant Vaan
    altalt
    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist2yr
    Commented

    I was hoping she would return to his stellar region with him somehow, that way he would have more capital in dealing with the Ascended that will be his enemies there. Seems like this isn't going to happen and she's just going to be another pointless character who will only have relevance in a future arc as a plot device to get him involved in w/e bs happens at the time.

    Ch 764 Chapter 759: Soldier of War, Promised To You
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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern · KevinAscending
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist2yr
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    Schleya received all the resources and techniques related to blood laws from the Blood Reaper Underworld from Davis after he destroyed it. The Blood Pledge Villa was said to have been a branch of the Blood Reaper Underworld that grew independent overtime, but possessed incomplete or inferior techniques to the latter. So Davis appearing confused or ignorant about Schleya's techniques, or her explanation about how she knows all the Villa's techniques seems out of place.

    "Except the immortal version of my Blood Pledge Worldheart Manual, I know everything, every technique the Blood Pledge Villa has to offer, even the one I used is something the Blood Pledge Villa's people rarely ever used."
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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist2yr
    Commented

    The Calamity Light is annoying, one of the few aspects of this novel that I dislike. I'm not a fan of plot devices which are intended to rush a mc, I feel like if such a device is needed, then your doing something wrong with your plotline. It was originally no big deal, because I recall Fallen Heaven stating Davis had about 1000 years before it would be problem, but out of nowhere. once Davis reaches 9th stage power levels, it's suddenly an imminent issue. Myria's also annoying, I would enjoy nothing more than Davis slapping her around then turning her into a prisoner as he tries to find a way to remove her from the girls body.

    Ch 1744 Congratulations
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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist2yr
    Commented

    I forgot how a feys cultivation works. Can someone remind me ? Does it work like a magical beast or do they still cultivate like a human. Or do they get to choose?

    Ch 1597 Desperation And Vengeance
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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist2yr
    Commented

    This little Gu city arc really feels like it came out of nowhere. It's also sucks pretty bad. Sigh...time to put this on hold.

    Ch 329 Marriage
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    Rise Of Evil Sword God
    Eastern · TheShadowLord
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist2yr
    Replied to 45unifol21

    This particular plotline is just to cliche, which is where the problem lies. Best way to remedy it is very fast acceptance from the Gmaw, perhaps sucking her into the harem quickly.

    Ch 272 A Hint of Pressure.
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    Rise of the Cosmic_Emperor
    Eastern · Nate_Quinn
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  • DirtyDaoist
    DirtyDaoist2yr
    Commented

    This plotline is way to forced and cliche. Guess it's time to put this on hold because this arc is obviously going to be garbage. Mingyue and LC were both huge disappointments here. Lots and lots character induced stupidity.

    Ch 999 Chapter 999: Stop if you can
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    Rise of the Demon God
    Eastern · Demonic_angel
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