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The MC's Int stat is not properly reflected with his actions and thought process...
I was hoping she would return to his stellar region with him somehow, that way he would have more capital in dealing with the Ascended that will be his enemies there. Seems like this isn't going to happen and she's just going to be another pointless character who will only have relevance in a future arc as a plot device to get him involved in w/e bs happens at the time.
Schleya received all the resources and techniques related to blood laws from the Blood Reaper Underworld from Davis after he destroyed it. The Blood Pledge Villa was said to have been a branch of the Blood Reaper Underworld that grew independent overtime, but possessed incomplete or inferior techniques to the latter. So Davis appearing confused or ignorant about Schleya's techniques, or her explanation about how she knows all the Villa's techniques seems out of place.
The Calamity Light is annoying, one of the few aspects of this novel that I dislike. I'm not a fan of plot devices which are intended to rush a mc, I feel like if such a device is needed, then your doing something wrong with your plotline. It was originally no big deal, because I recall Fallen Heaven stating Davis had about 1000 years before it would be problem, but out of nowhere. once Davis reaches 9th stage power levels, it's suddenly an imminent issue. Myria's also annoying, I would enjoy nothing more than Davis slapping her around then turning her into a prisoner as he tries to find a way to remove her from the girls body.