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HaremBeGone

HaremBeGone

Lv5

From anime to manga to LN what a journey

2018-02-04 JoinedCanada
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  • HaremBeGone
    HaremBeGone8mth
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    Story overall is super basic with constant writing deveatioms leading to meaningless prose and incessant repeating of lines. Overall the author wants to try to fill up the word count with detail but fails most of the time. Martial Arts theme is cool and all but just not executed that well. Typos almost every paragraph. They range from improper grammar to entirely missing words. If the author were just to read over what he wrote it would easily be an entertaining read. The fact of the matter is the authors lack of editing just leads to the readers becoming unwilling editors themselves. I can confidently predict that if the Author focused any amount on cleaning up simple mistakes the novel could easily become more popular. Unfortunately as it stands the Novel is very close to MACHINE TRANSLATION quality and thus at most will be considered a filler book between people waiting for what they actually enjoy reading.

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    The Martial Unity
    Action · Lord_Streak
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    HaremBeGone8mth
    Commented

    Uhhhhh what’s the last sentence?

    He had initially sworn off covert operation missions because he wasn't particularly interested them, but since then he had come to realize that if he truly wanted to be able to adapt to any Martial Art, any foe and any threat, he needed to obtain some degree of proficiency in all fields. There would always be certain
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    The Martial Unity
    Action · Lord_Streak
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  • HaremBeGone
    HaremBeGone1yr
    Posted

    Hard to describe the amount of anticipation I feel waiting for each new chapter. This novel is one of the few that actually reads like a NOVEL. Not some Comic or Lightnovel or regurgitated Copy Webnovel that always plague the popular voting. I barely use this site when looking for a book at this point and keep it around merely to look over once I’ve exhausted the sites with actual quality. Unfortunately on this site it’s akin to having a treasure being buried under a pile of shit. That shit being bland copy books with boring plots. Forced romances or harems. And typically awful grammar. Author if you read this post I recommend putting this story on sites that truly care about reading a book, as Webnovel is just for mass produced garbage that scratches the itch of people who just want the same old boring tropes. Truly truly a good book. Seriously Author it’s extremely hard for quality books to prosper here. Just look at the charts. I beg that you consider applying your creativity where it will be appreciated

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    Dead Star Dockyards
    Sci-fi · cakeonfrosting
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  • HaremBeGone
    HaremBeGone1yr
    Commented
    "Then, what you saw in those movies or footage. What do you think about it?"
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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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    HaremBeGone1yr
    Commented

    Not True but it’ a Chinese author so obviously they usually don’t know much.

    Such couples weren't rare, but most of them belonged to rich circles.
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    Super Detective in the Fictional World
    Sci-fi · Icy Plain's Three Elegance
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    HaremBeGone2yr
    Commented

    But he wasn’ t white in his past life either so……….

    Luke, on the other hand, hadn't been African American in his past life, nor was he one now.
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    Super Detective in the Fictional World
    Sci-fi · Icy Plain's Three Elegance
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    HaremBeGone2yr
    Commented

    All I’m surrounded by is fear. And dead men.

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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • HaremBeGone
    HaremBeGone2yr
    Replied to Aurelius05

    I assume Lord Of The Mysteries-also known as Lord of Mysteries

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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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    HaremBeGone2yr
    Commented

    Author I am an extremely petty man. Please make sure they get punished.

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    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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    HaremBeGone2yr
    Replied to Resurgent
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    Rise of The Anti God
    Eastern · Resurgent
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  • HaremBeGone
    HaremBeGone3yr
    Commented

    HEY HEY THERE IT IS. Reading on webnovel wouldnt be complete without the Anti Black messages that is typical of Chinese Culture.

    Tony burst out laughing. "The angel is black? If only those people who call him an angel know."
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    Super Detective in the Fictional World
    Sci-fi · Icy Plain's Three Elegance
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  • HaremBeGone
    HaremBeGone3yr
    Commented
    Ch 108 108 - Livestream
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • HaremBeGone
    HaremBeGone3yr
    Posted

    Do me a favour please if you see this comment, Shoot me a reply if this novel ever gets an editor so I can actually attempt to read it thanks.

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    A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world
    Sci-fi · SagelyDaoist
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    HaremBeGone3yr
    Commented

    Hey Hey! There it is. Can’t be a tried and true Chinese novel without racism.

    "Uhh, the manager had explained this previously. It's because when Tyreal transmigrated through the ozone layer, he had his face first. It wouldn't make sense to maintain a pale face after all that friction and heat..."
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    Almighty Video Game Designer
    Games · Qing Shan Qu Zui
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  • HaremBeGone
    HaremBeGone3yr
    Posted

    Honestly I can’t say much about this novel because due to the fact that it’s in dire need of editing it’s difficult to even piece togther what the plot actually is.

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    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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    HaremBeGone3yr
    Commented

    I hope the soul beast influence on Joshua doesnt take too long. Its weird having one of the most prideful and demonic beasts have a master who gets willingly mocked so often.

    Ch 237 Chapter 183: A Really Short Duel
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    Risen World
    Urban · VivitheGreat
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