Really dorio dies and not Pillar? boooo

Thanks, author for the great story. And personally, after seeing this ending I prefer his last stand against the raikage.

What Hana did with Suzu was objectively worst then this and this right up Hana's alley. I mean he has repeatedly cheated with other women when he was in a relationship with yoshino so this really shouldn't have been a surprise.

Do you mean the fourth Minato dies? or the third war ends

hmmm so is he gonna come back at the end of the 3rd war before obito "dies" or after. Or after the 3rd war after the Kyuubi attack or before, Personally, I would like it before Obito dies. But this also means that Kakashi's dad dead sad.

These 2 chapters were very dark. Not unexpected but ...

Thank author for doing the Pov change. I thought it was pretty good.

Thanks for the chapter. kinda sad I liked Yoshino :(, Hana being faithful wasn't even a possibility but there was a possibility that the relationship would continue. Totally forgot that Shikamaru's mom was Yoshino.

Great chapter having another POV is very funny. Poor Kushina she was actually right all along. It would be nice to have both Hana's and another's Pov at the same time like for example in a discussion with the hokage or other important members of Konoha we can see Hana's true thoughts and what the other person thinks of Hana.

Wellll you know there's this woman named Mikoto Uchicha. I heard that she is veryyyyyy sexy. Oh how fun it would be to see hana flame Fugaku and the Uchicha Elders "he doesn't deserve you he is a no name ninja not even a chunin. Oh what he is Anbu, wait what he is an elite jonin you must be joking."

Yea checked multiple wikis and you are right the third had no connection to the attack. Looks like I've read too many Fanfictions and now am mixing them up with the original timeline my apologies.

Huh if I am not wrong The third raikage was the one who deposed the second and worked alongside the gold and silver brothers to kill him and Tobirama at their meeting or something like that because of the second's desire for peace. Is this your take on it? as it looks like this time he will also be deposed however this makes it seem like it was all planned. Or was this the result of Mito's interference? And if the message is for a private meeting to discuss peace like the original timeline then Tsunade has to convince Mito to join him there. With both of them together and his students, the gold and silver brothers don't stand a chance.

Why should he feel Guilty??

A just messed with the wrong person he gonna get smacked around.

Not to help the NCR but to stop the tunnelers from getting to the surface.

Soo people have tried to explain multiple times already why the Legion was able to contend against the NCR in the Mojave and the answer can be found directly on the WIKI; "After three years of occupying the Mojave, the NCR still had a tenuous grasp on the region, in no small part due to skirmishes with local tribes and the dramatic Operation: Sunburst, which broke the Brotherhood of Steel strength in the Mojave. (the battle at Helios one) These problems were further amplified by weak supply lines: the delivery of a package from Navarro to The Divide activated the nuclear missile silos in Hopeville and Ashton, triggering their launch. The resulting cataclysmic event literally tore the earth apart, turning the entire region into a killing zone. Reinforcements and traders could no longer take the 127 to reach Vegas. As such, the Legion has faced a severely weakened NCR force at Hoover Dam. To further exploit this weakness, Caesar launched flanking attacks against Camp Golf and other NCR outposts along the Colorado River, although the bulk of the Legion's forces was focused on the dam itself." So TLDR Bad logistics which was worsened by the destruction of the Divide one of the routes from California to the Mojave and Sabotage. and the NCR lost a lot of men during their assault on Helios one and from then on they were trying to play catch up with bad logistics and indecisive and corrupt leadership. Btw important questions since this is 3 years before the battle of Hoover dam did the battle of Helios one already happen and did the nuclear explosion in the Divide happen? according to the Wiki the explosion in the divide happened some months before the Battle so the towns there should still be thriving and you can incorporate them in the story by having Nash send him there on a delivery or by escorting a caravan there If the Divide hadn't been destroyed yet then he should go there immediately not to help the NCR with it's logistics but to save the towns there and stop the tunnelers from emerging to the surface.

This is so Cringe I love it. The writing quality is excellent (thank god). It's only been 7 chapters but all of them have come out fast. And for story and character, it's still early days and only really 4 chapters in but I love it.