Amestrean
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You have a good grasp of pacing. So nothing major to complain about đBut now that things have settled, I think I would like to see him struggle a little. I'm not saying things have been smooth sailing until now for him.. But in terms of reading experience, I didn't feel any real danger for him lately... The kidnapping attempt, everybody knew it would fail, obviously, and even before against the Tekur, since he grew stronger and stronger by extracting them, as a reader you could tell he was going to be OK in the end, even if you expected some treatorous plot by hyumans..So something like a dilemma, or a threat where he will/might lose something/someone important to him would be good. But that's just my opinion
I realise he's in an area where most of the lords and adventurers are non-humans, and thus not especially friendly, but with the sheer numbers of people in the world, you would expect more contact with people other than summons. Like a few adventurers who could settle in his territory, without necessarily have to pledge their loyalty like the elves.. Like just a base camp for them to work in the forest. His territory is new and not yet attractive for this kind of thing to happen yet, but it could be something to strive for: to be attractive for adventurers activity.
Schizophrenia going rampant unnoticed thanks to technology đ
I would say [Circumvent] is just too useful not to choose. Also, considering the war to come, [cloud step] should be pretty useful in the midst of combat, once he is surrounded by enemies. considering the ultimate, the immortality thing is seen too often in web novels.. . I would love to see something else. and I feel like [Knight's supression] would be great to build his 'legend'. He would be capable to wear down anyone in 1on1, and further improve his standing as the best player.
not a fatal disease, but still ended up dying. .. isn't it the definition of fatal? đ
oh my feels...
I feel ya. .
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your ancesters were sick of seeing you jerk off, they send you away in another world đ¤Ł
i like such banter ^^
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