vali_bloodborne
Aspiring writer myself I really enjoy all the original stories here.
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vali_bloodborne6mthCommentedNo it was perfect, it shows how good he is at manipulating people and the situation. The planning ahead and not only using brute force.
"It's a bit plain, but that's it."- vali_bloodborne6mthCommented
I love the choice thank you. Even when the premise of a story sounds amazing, if it is in 1st person it takes me right out of it and I end up not reading it. So thanks again!
I've been tinkering around with POV and the perspectives, and decided I would stick to 3rd person unless 1st person is necessary. Also, are you liking the story so far? - vali_bloodborne8mthCommentedTaking down the woman instantly is fun at first, but you will get bored soon.
- vali_bloodborne8mthCommentedRiser might not realize it, but because of his "Sex Mastery," almost all of his actions, temperaments, and talks, make Ravel unable to think of others other than her older brother.
- vali_bloodborne9mthCommented(A/N: Whose getting Final Fantasy 16? I'm not because my broke ass doesn't have a ps5. Put an F in the chat.)
- vali_bloodborne10mthCommentedHe also took any cash he had on him. He popped one into his mouth and lit it up with Dragon Fire. He took a long drag before he exhaled out his nose.
- vali_bloodborne1yrCommentedLi Hao's entire body had undergone a sharp change. Not only had his looks improved, but even his dick had grown bigger.
- vali_bloodborne1yrCommentedCh 17 Vote which are best girls from Fate Verse, Highschool DxD, and Solo Leveling World
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Yes please!
By the way, should I make a summary of the power scale in this novel? - vali_bloodborne1yrCommented
How’s she not a villainess?
Also in high school, There used to be a man who tried to woo her and even confessed his love to her but she rejected him. Later when he found another girlfriend, Both he and that woman disappeared. - vali_bloodborne1yrCommentedCh 10 Announcement
- vali_bloodborne2yrCommentedCh 432 Spatial Crack: Bai Zemin vs World
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Glad to hear it! Although just a start, already enjoying the novel
This chapter has been deleted. - vali_bloodborne2yrCommentedCh 18 Monster Encyclopedia
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I think It would be a nice change of pace every now and then to put in some mature content, just not like every other chapter like DC. I have really enjoyed the style of this novel, but having a mature chapter here and there does bring a bit more spice to it as long as it helps progress the story and relationships not just for fan service.
Ch 483 Relieving His Pain - vali_bloodborne2yrPosted
The Story started of great, slightly new variation on the system model and something at least moderately new. As soon as you hit around chapter 53, however, it becomes almost a chapter by chapter remake of Martial World! What happen to the world building creativitY from the first 50 chapters. Now I cringe when I see the almost whole chapter pastes of the other Story with only name and technique changes. Started out really liking this one, eager for the next chapter, but now just made me want to reread Matial World.