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chloe was bult overall poorly as a character. one of the greatest assets of great storytelling is to make a strong villain who is up to par with the lead, only with opposing stances or views. these types of women are a dime a dozen and the way she acts doesnt match the level of sophistication in her supposed world. she could have been built as deviously manipulative with an angelic facade, it will be cliche but at least more acceptable.
who talks like this these days? i like how the cliche plot is used though. but they have such a power disadvantage. the way Leo is setting her up for failure. if it was a business eeal, she needs to know all the premisw. deception because he did not disclose the motive of the marriage request and chloe's involvement. granted, he was attracted to her even prior to all of that, he should have been honest. and that includes being honest with his mother why he hated chloe
alright i like the character but what is it with writers writing their gls are stupid f*ckheads???? innicent or pure she is just stuuùpid. how can she even a mafia boss' daughter without a hunt of self preservation. and mind u, the author was trying to let us think she is intelligent. being too naive and being innocent are two different things. gosh!
its been so long. the ml is always absent during her emotional abuse. while he and the fl are not in love she is alaays rigud and stupid character disguised as intelligent and harworking but no backbone. gosh! she really shouod just die. or the author can prolly oay us back the coins spent
do in this universe, a brilliant doctor like the fl us so stuoid not to even check her an estry e en with the imrpobability. for someone so good in science, and should hsve been empirical in her views, she is always emotional and shuts her mouth in crucial convos, the author is allowing more airtimr to stupid worthless side characters to buold up a draggged storyline just to agitate the readers. sure. my blood prsssure is high because the fl is soo stupid and the ml is a decorative piece of meat. do better!
years too late dude... and pls authir stop dragging this tristan doesnt deserve pages of a story he nrver should be part of. in fact im sure the authir is a woman who is so naive to thin kthat this kind of portryala is ever ok. if fl will give this man a chance just becuae of the son pfffft... that is so amusing and pathetic. so much for thr independent woman who learned her lesson. people dont change easily. and if i were him id cut off my ties to my mother if she is thus vile. family or not. anyone capable of hurting another like her doesnt deserve lovr no matter the reason.