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Marmora

Marmora

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  • Marmora
    Marmora11d
    Commented

    What a disappointment. I don't know why people like Specialization so much, I think it's just because it's the most "different". Since it is not the strongest or most versatile category. And this is the most difficult category to work in. Not to mention that Specialization Hatsus come with HEAVY restrictions. Also, most specialization abilities are mediocre or are hyper-specialized. If a Specialization faced an Enhancement with both at the same level, in ten fights, the Enhancement would win between 6 and 7 of the fights. The same goes for Transmutation and Emission, they would win most fights against a Specialization.

    'King Type Aura, interesting...' he thought to himself.
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    Power is Everything || ASOIAF X HxH fic
    Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • Marmora
    Marmora13d
    Posted

    For the standards of Fanfic on this site, this story is very good. To be honest, I stopped reading in chapter 4 because I didn't like the main character, so I'll give my review of what I've read so far. There are some things that are uncomfortable for me, like the main character being a classic hero who saves the princess at the right moment, thus making her fall in love. Or some chapters are gigantic, like chapter two could easily be divided into three. I could be wrong, but I'm almost certain that the author is from the USA, given that the main character's personality is the same as that of all Fanfics by USA authors. One thing I don't really like is that it seems like I'm always reading the same main character with a different skin. Not to mention that I don't find the personality of this type of main character very interesting. But aside from these things that bothered me, I had a very pleasant surprise, something I didn't expect. Something that I thought would happen one way, happened another way. That was something I missed, nowadays most things are predictable. Regarding Nen, the author is blessed with an understanding of how Nen's categories work. But there are still some errors, but just by understanding how the 6 categories of Nen work, I will ignore any other errors. And since it's a Fanfic where Nen is placed in another world, the author can make a mistake or change some of Nen's rules and say "I do what I want, I'm the author and the work is mine," and there's no way to argue with that, so it stays as it is.

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    Power is Everything || ASOIAF X HxH fic
    Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • Marmora
    Marmora15d
    Commented

    You don't know how happy I am to know that the strongest is not from the Specialist category.

    It wasn't Barristan who answered him but Rhaella as she approached the fire from her wheelhouse "He's not, my husband is a simple 'Brute Type'" she said as she sat next to Daemon.
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    Power is Everything || ASOIAF X HxH fic
    Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • Marmora
    Marmora21d
    Commented

    Why do I feel a certain favoritism here?

    "Because they are so rare though some of the greatest heroes in history are speculated by maesters to be King Types," Lysa says with excitement in her voice.
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    Power is Everything || ASOIAF X HxH fic
    Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • Marmora
    Marmora23d
    Replied to DeadCat5757

    Friend, I'm sorry to be offensive, but how did you get past 5th grade with that grammar? My God, where's the punctuation? What I understood was you saying that “cuts that cut the world” were neither Dismantle nor Cut. After all, look at how this part is written "it is not ''Cleave'' and nor is it ''Dismantle'' it is it's own thing all together and in later chapters it's even considered a whole other technique". For someone who is not fluent in English, your text is a complete mess and its meaning is all lost.

    He gave her a nod, with UI and the cleave technique he was certain he was strong by human Standards, in fact in the Manga the cleave technique was able to quite literally bypass all defences including Gojo's limitless so if he trains as best he could he should be able to achieve similar feats with it.
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    Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)
    Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational
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  • Marmora
    Marmora24d
    Commented

    I can't believe it, have I finally found an author who understands the categories of Nen.

    "Every Aura user is born with a specific type of aura that will give them a certain affinity for certain aura abilities, while making it harder for them to learn others" he explains.
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    Power is Everything || ASOIAF X HxH fic
    Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • Marmora
    Marmora24d
    Replied to TheSentience

    lol, so you don't follow the manga. This text is a mess and very confusing. I'll go by what I understand, I think he meant that a Simple Domain can cancel Sukuna's Cuts. A Simple Domain not cancel the Cursed Technique, it can reduce the impact of Cursed Technique but not cancel. As we saw with Kusakabe in the last chapter of the manga. There's a reason they're called Anti-Domain Techniques. And the "slashes that cut the world" is a stronger Dismantle with "target", this has already been explained. So much so that when Sukuna uses "slashes that cut the world", Dismantle's Kanji 解 appears, so "slashes that cut the world" is indeed a Dismantle, and it is not a new technique developed.

    He gave her a nod, with UI and the cleave technique he was certain he was strong by human Standards, in fact in the Manga the cleave technique was able to quite literally bypass all defences including Gojo's limitless so if he trains as best he could he should be able to achieve similar feats with it.
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    Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)
    Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational
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  • Marmora
    Marmora27d
    Replied to Exalted_Commoner
    His uncle cracks a small smile at that "I've always been bitter Daemon, now help me to my bed" He says as he reaches his arm out. Daemon grabs his arm helping him up.
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    Power is Everything || ASOIAF X HxH fic
    Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • Marmora
    Marmora27d
    Replied to DeadCat5757
    He gave her a nod, with UI and the cleave technique he was certain he was strong by human Standards, in fact in the Manga the cleave technique was able to quite literally bypass all defences including Gojo's limitless so if he trains as best he could he should be able to achieve similar feats with it.
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    Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)
    Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    The silly creature, you said, 'How have you spent enough time on this app to read 7000+ books,' and I said, 'friend, you think I've read 7000 books. In my entire life, I haven't read even 300.' And I increased the number from 7,624 to 7,627, just to show that this number means nothing. It doesn't mean I read the 7,000; you can increase your own number to a thousand in minutes. Possibly, I haven't even read the synopsis for 90% of those 7,000. I can make this number go up to 8,000 in less than 30 minutes without even trying. And as I said, 'and most of those 300 I only read about 2, 3, or 10 pages.' If I had read 7,000 books, I would be proud, not ashamed.

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    Book&Literature · Pretending_Author
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    I mentioned two scenarios because I don't believe in automatic bans, and there is nothing mentioned about automatic bans on the forum, at least I didn't find anything. LOL. Wow, then you don't like it when I call you an idiot. I just increased it to 7,627, you know how I did it so quickly? Want to know how I did it so quickly? I just entered two random novels and scrolled through two chapters, and the other one I didn't even open a single chapter, just added it to the library. That way, I read three more books in 1 minute. DANCE, FOOL, DANCE 👏👏👏👏

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    Book&Literature · Pretending_Author
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    LOL, It's not possible, LOL. I knew that my messages could be seen on my profile; I even replied to some of yours like that. I said, I find the specific messages that were deleted strange, and I also said that I've never seen messages get 'banned' automatically, and I don't even know if that's possible. And then you feel uncomfortable that I call you an Idiot, but also, you couldn't even understand the parable, or what it refers to. Or what does 'I know who you are, and you know who I am' mean. 'You don't know anything, Jon Snow.' Lol, friend, you think I've read 7000 books. In my entire life I haven't read even 300, and most of those 300 I only read about 2, 3 or 10 pages, then I never looked at them again. Or you saying 'go out and see the sun,' other than this fic here, it's been over a month since I read anything from the Wab novel, not to mention the weeks that I didn't open the website to look at the Inbox. And out of curiosity, I have a nice tan. Meanwhile, I got it right about you, childish and stupid. Do you want me to explain the parable too? Same as I did with the analogy, but it will only confirm that you are an idiot, but if you want, I'll explain. Seriously, I found your last post funny, it looks like a Fool dancer. If you want to keep dancing like that, that's fine with me, I can even clap for you.

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    Book&Literature · Pretending_Author
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    What a silly discussion, LOL. Ever heard of 'The Parable of the Donkey, the Tiger, and the Lion'? Who is the donkey and the tiger between the two of us? It's not to answer, just think.

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    But in any case, I'm tired of you; I know who you are, and you know who I am. And I won't explain this analogy to you again. Ariverdette.

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    "as soon as you posted them they got taken down." So how did you respond to the ones that got banned? The last messages I saw being deleted, you replied within minutes, and the message got banned within minutes. But the other messages took hours to get 'banned.' So we have two scenarios, first, you saw minutes after my posts and were already commenting on them before they were deleted. Where you would have to have seen and be responding within minutes. Or the second scenario, you just deleted my comments.

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    Not to mention that the ban times don't seem to match up. Before, it would take hours to get banned after a comment; now it's a matter of minutes. Seriously, isn't that strange? This and another thing are strange and don't seem to fit very well.

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    Seriously, it seems like you're fabricating evidence for your alibi. In my last comment, there was nothing that would trigger an automatic ban, if that automatic ban really exists. Let's see if this one will also be banned, putting the narrative in his favor once again.

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    Book&Literature · Pretending_Author
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    I find this very suspicious; I've never heard or seen anyone talk about their responses being automatically deleted by the site. But I know that authors can delete comments and responses; I know that some authors delete reviews they don't like. And my two comments explained and served to contextualize many important things. Without those two comments, you have the whole narrative distorted in your favor. So, to me, you are suspicious, very SUSPICIOUS.

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    Come on, you deleted two of my comments? How childish. Looks like I got under your skin, huh? These ideas you have are totally communist and would never work. But I'll stop messing with you; otherwise, you'll start crying soon.

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
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  • Marmora
    Marmora3mth
    Replied to Pretending_Author

    Seriously, and you come to say that I'm distorting the narrative in my favor. And then you tell me that you're not an idiot; you couldn't even understand a mere analogy without me having to explain each part. Let's use Volantis alone as an example, hypothetically everything went well for the MC, he conquered the city and freed the slaves without any resistance, without war, but now the entire economy of the city is shattered, all properties are devalued, and food will become much more expensive. The masters will start getting rid of the remaining 'slaves/workers' in masses, money devaluing, and basic necessities getting more expensive each day, and an extra mouth to feed that doesn't generate money is entirely disposable. This will lead to a catastrophe, crimes will increase sporadically, not to mention the immense social inequality it will generate. "MC is prepared to finance the feeding of the former slaves" This idea is horrendous. First, where is he going to get so much money? Because he would need billions to sustain the former slaves constantly, not just mere millions, imagine sustaining a city with inflation getting worse every day. And do you really think he could get millions just by selling Valyrian steel to the Houses of Westeros? And even if he manages to get several million from the Houses of Westeros, how will he continue generating more money? Especially because the MC is breaking the world's economy even more each time, even with the commercial fleet, which may help the MC's finances a bit, won't sustain for long. It's useless to have a great trade, but no one has money to buy the merchandise. He won't be able to generate more money than he spends. And that's just following the example of Volantis, not counting the other Free Cities. And about the family tree, come on, don't be a crybaby, you made a wrong comment, just accept it. After all, you said exactly 'every person in your family tree since Aegon the Conqueror had the 'Blood of the Dragon.'' And I have to guess that you meant 'Valyrian blood,' while in fact, you said exactly 'Blood of the Dragon.' If you wanted to say 'Valyrian blood,' you would have mentioned Larra Rogare and not Aemma Arryn. And what makes me believe this is that you mentioned Aemma Arryn and her mother being Targaryen, just to reaffirm your mention of 'Blood of the Dragon.' In these last comments, to me, you seem like a crybaby, and increasingly more childish.

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    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
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