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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso9d
    Commented

    It's always good to find a Warbrother. We are together Kleiton.

    He was arguing on social media as a keyboard warrior and suddenly the scene went dark.
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso10d
    Commented

    It used to be weird with a western name in a story that takes place in a Chinese world, now it has a Japanese name. This story isn't getting any better.

    "My name is Mikena and I am a demigod. I only found you for one reason and that is to survive in this world of cultivation, at first I did not want to reveal my status and just tried to befriend you and help you from the shadows, but I did not expect you to reveal me and much less know my true level of cultivation." - Said Mikena while trying to be as friendly as possible.
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    The Yandere System in the World of Cultivation
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso10d
    Posted

    How can this story have such a high rating. Before reading the story I recommend reading the comments of the chapters up to 20, before deciding whether to read it, don't go by ratings.

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    The Yandere System in the World of Cultivation
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso10d
    Commented

    Using that name Victor in a story that takes place in the East takes me completely out of the immersion of the story.

    Ch 19 The gods are watching you!
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso10d
    Commented

    Using that name Victor in a story that takes place in the East takes me completely out of the immersion of the story.

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    The Yandere System in the World of Cultivation
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso10d
    Commented

    I can't read Victor. How can this story get 5.0 stars.

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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso10d
    Replied to grandis

    He's called Victor as far as you read? Or he will change his name.

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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso10d
    Replied to VirginAnon420
    "One head... two arms... two legs... I am... human..."
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    The Yandere System in the World of Cultivation
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso11d
    Replied to Sin_of_GREED
    [ Goddess of Lust is surprised by your actions ]
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    The Yandere System in the World of Cultivation
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso11d
    Commented
    After losing the last thing he had, Victor knew it was the end, the end of his life. Drunk as a skunk afterwards, when he returned to the small room of his apartment he looked in the mirror at his shabby appearance.
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso11d
    Commented
    After losing the last thing he had, Victor knew it was the end, the end of his life. Drunk as a skunk afterwards, when he returned to the small room of his apartment he looked in the mirror at his shabby appearance.
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    The Yandere System in the World of Cultivation
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso18d
    Replied to tenebrosso

    For those who read my comment, you are saved.

    'Is she beautiful?'
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso18d
    Commented

    I bet the life of anyone reading this that She is a Sword.

    'Is she beautiful?'
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso18d
    Commented

    I bet the life of anyone reading this that She is a Sword.

    'Is she beautiful?'
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso18d
    Replied to rimuru_sama
    In the cultivation world, there were four essential elements: wealth, magic, companionship and land. Wealth was placed at the first.
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso18d
    Replied to rimuru_sama
    A ninth-grade aptitude meant that he had a useless spiritual core and he would not be able to reach the foundation level even after cultivating for a hundred years.
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso21d
    Commented
    Seeing her dejected appearance, Elandor had a big smile on his face and knew his first objective was almost complete.
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso21d
    Commented
    Jasmine and Eve had their eyes go so round that they could almost pop out from their sockets, even Elandor could feel the intensity as they all saw how David slapped Aushima.
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso21d
    Replied to unknown_person_2675

    Friend, the story from the beginning is forced, I don't know how this story has a rating of 4.77, but with such a high rating I think it should improve further on.

    "You disappoint me Aushima", spoke David with his hero-like personality.
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  • tenebrosso
    tenebrosso21d
    Replied to Sheizzcoldasice

    Wait a minute, I don't think I got it right, do you mean that David is a hypocrite who only sees the profits and doesn't care about the girls? Not, have to make him be a Protagonist like Shirou Emiya, Issei Hyoudou or Naruto, those kind protagonists, idealist irritants who think only they are right, and make him care about girls, so that when he loses them SUFFER 😈 😈😈😈 CRY, SCREAM IN PAIN, and it makes readers feel good.

    David looked at the sulking Aushima and finally broke the silence, "I am sorry Aushima, but you know I have always been unfair and taken into account the majority's view, I see no valid reason why should I be on your side and refuse Elandor".
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