Gotta say, this novel has slowly become a huge disappointment. Please just write a romance story separately and stop with the snail pacing of the story we actually want. After writing an amazing novel in BoTDS , you end up writing this garbage? You're a disgrace to your fan's expectations. Repent!

Terrible writing backed up by your subjective views of a world setting where your modern society morals don't apply. I don't even know where to begin telling u why you're wrong but I'll leave it at that, teaching an ignorant writer refusing to accept constructive criticism is a waste of time, judging from how you reacted to previous comments. QUIT writing, get a different job.

Read this chapter again after a few more years of writing experience and tell me you aren't cringing.

So far, I'm invested. Hoping the trend continues as I haven't had a good novel to read in a while. Too many trash novels on this site.

Wasn't it fear of darkness

Sadly the author wrote that over two years ago.

Babysitting trope outta nowhere. Disappointing.. Guess your creativity ran out of juice, author. Doing something completely out of line with the character you built.

Tsk tsk... Not bad

Very well written

Started off great but all characters simultaneously degraded in intelligence and turned into mere puppets. What a disappointing experience; had such high hopes for this novel and that's why I'm even more disappointed. Sigh!..

:)

Very nice pacing. Probably slow pacing for new readers but I think it's really appropriate.

I'm also curious to know. Surely the author will reveal later on.

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Don't let the toxic readers affect your mental health. Rest when u need it. Thank you

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