EchoLiveJam
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To see the sky cleared from the crimson shade of fear is what everyone wanted, and yet no one dared to do something to make it a reality.
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EchoLiveJam3yrCommented*woman*
Patrick got out of the car to meet his lifesaver. The lifesaver was a women because he clearly could saw a black long hair that came out behind her balaclava. She was wearing a helmet and there were a lot of rockets on her back. She shook his hand, "Name's Charlie, pleasure doing business with you."- EchoLiveJam3yrCommented
You really need to have someone proofread your work.
"Ok, tomorrow is school time. I still need to deal with my grades," he said as he walked home with his MP5 on the front of his bodies. - EchoLiveJam3yrCommented
*Does*
"Is he wants to race us?" Another black guy said.