Zabne123

Thanks for the chapter! Love the plot twist after plot twist.

I really enjoyed the combination of the 2 mcs. They both have their own interesting personalities, and I like how the author combined what could be 2 stories into one so fluidly. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the chapter but can you stop with some much underscores lol. I do audio and there is nothing more annoying than hearing underscore 20 times

I wonder the samething. Ever since he has been in Hogwarts he hasn't mentioned the rat once I don't think.

Thanks for the chapter. Just want to say that I don't think people should be able to see a weapons info like that. Usually things like that can cause problems and jealousy. You know how people kill for riches. Just some random guard at a gate shouldn't be able to tell all the info of such a rare weapon like that. Just doesn't make sense.

I really hope this isn't the rest of the book. MC being a slave because he is too stupid to not want to show off. If so I'm out because it's unbearable to read.

I really enjoyed the story so far. The Mc is op no doubt about it. kind of wish there was a limit to some of his talent abilities but there is nothing wrong with op characters.

It is not about it being too fast paced it's about you completely skipping normal reactions that should occur. Like I said it's like you hit the skip button.

Thanks for the chapter. I just wanted to that the story is a bit too rushed. Your telling me he shares his talent with his sister and she doesn't have any reaction? There are a few more spots like that where it seems like you're hitting the skip button on a chat box when talking to a npc.

I'm really enjoying the story so far. It's all around a good read.