well this will be my last chapter of this one. Liked the story and all but needs an editor BAD. lmk if it becomes legible later.

Forgot to note, after the translation goes downhill even the genders of characters flip back and forth. He in one sentence, she in the next.

Good story but after a while the writing gets basically unreadable. Sometimes using 3 names for one character in the same chapter also having different names for objects every time they are brought up.