RedDragon75
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RedDragon753mthCommentedshould be soar
The rest of the game wasn't that easy for him. The opposing batters started to foul off a lot and added in a few bad misses and his pitch count started to sore. He was taken out after just five innings, nearing a hundred pitches. He only gave up two hits and had eight strikeouts though so I thought he had something to be proud of. Instead he hung his head as he went to his dugout after the fifth.- RedDragon752yrCommented
Change register to registration
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couping should be coping
If a Baron like Norehca was having a hard time standing on his own two feet, it was easy to imagine how the lower-level enemy troops, or "hunters" as they were called, were couping with Izroth's Soul Pressure. - RedDragon753yrCommented
Point Kyle our way if you see him
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Change pitch to pitching
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victor instead of victory
From above the stage, a bell rang, signifying the end of the match. At the same time, the system announced Silent Wonder as the victory, momentarily silencing the stunned crowd. - RedDragon753yrCommented
i think wanted should be warned
"I've heard that Yan Xiaoqian used to consider you a rival. In that case, I'll use the same move that defeated her against you. I hope you're ready!" Solitary Frost wanted Silent Wonder, who stood 40 yards away. - RedDragon753yrCommented
change hit to hint
"Not only have her Basic Attributes risen, but her combat standards have skyrocketed as well. It seems Zero Wing still has some secrets," Yan Tianxing, FFF's commander, commented as he watched Graceful Moon with squinted eyes, a hit of surprise flashing in his gaze. - RedDragon753yrCommented
In this case, chariot and tank can be interchangeable. A chariot could be considered one of the first tanks.
"Good! Since you've signed the contract, take a look at this," Shi Feng said as he revealed the Hell Chariot Design to the three Master Engineers. "If you don't have any issues with it, you may begin production right away." - RedDragon753yrCommented
Replace "head" with "he".
"Amazing! This is an Intermediate Tank!" Burning Abyss's eyes glowed with excitement as head read the Hell Tank's introduction. - RedDragon753yrCommented
Change neutral to neural
Shi Feng's attack was simply too fast, but it wasn't just because of his high Attack Speed. His neutral response time and physical acceleration were also ridiculously fast. - RedDragon753yrCommented
Delete either know or recognize as they are redundant. I would delete know as recognize makes more sense in the sentence.
Ordinary players might not know recognize Arctic Manatite, but merchant players were very familiar with the material.