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Just a guy who loves good fiction. That does not mean that I can make good fiction.
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Dragons exist but birth control doesn't. Hmmm.... Priorities I guess .
This para looks sus. Like it wasn't written by humans. Looks like they just feed it to Google translate and make obvious edits but this paragraph sort of gives it away
No he is a troll.
Spoken like a scammer.
Dokkaebi: Tell me something I don't know
This is atarting to look nice!
Meta meta meta. More like METAL! 🤘
The best lies are wrapped in truths
It's not sufficient to see through a good lie
The generic dialogue of someone dying. You would expect something more kickass like "Death is only the beginning"
Wasn't his head split open. How did he talk? And why is he spelling things out like a kindergartener.
That's how you cut down on belly fat
Enter kafka: When Gregor Samza woke up from a nightmare he found himself turned into a cockroach. His first thought was that he had to go to work. Kim Dokja: Do you think I'm a cockroach you dumfuk!
Give that man a medal. Sanitize it before delivering.
The complete absence of thought by the Mc for his own parents tells plenty
Nice work, MI amigo! You are my friendo!
Does dying on the inside count?
The first chapter is always crucial no?