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The writing quality are horrible, i reconmend get a profreader, cause the gramar doesnt make sense, the punctuation practically does not exist, i coulnt make pass rhe 1 chapter because of that,
You have to be more carefull with the pronouns, you are switching between male and female
was she not sexually assaulted by Diamante, how is she still a virgin?
how does he(Malcom) comment on Green Arrow, if that hero persona is yet to be created, and is batman already active?
Was not the reason for just being one CP0 is for the least loose ends, dressing as a marine and revealing their whole plan whiout skipping nothing, is this not supposed to be the best spy organization in the world? CP0 doesn’t make that kind of mistakes.
Very good, i would have thought that you were going to use Tobi souls for the revival of Minato, but maybe are you going to use kenshi soul?
what is the name of the original?
the summary is a lie, there is nothing realistic in having a child luffy having sex every night, i recommend or you fix the summary o just don't read this thing.
Robin not knowing to read is wrong, how could she undestand ponygliph if she doesnt know how to read, and besides, she is a full ohara scholar, so she must have know how to read
It is believed that kaido has awakened his fruit, because of the great control he has on his body