Finally!

I love the sweetness of these characters, but why to they all have to question their own thoughts like this? I realise that the inner conflict is a way to create tension in the story, I just wonder if different characters can experience it differently. Yanyan asks himself "What did I just think?" Maybe Yi Mu can easily realize what his thoughts mean, but becomes conflicted with how much his life would change if he accepted his own heart. He is already more aware of his sexuality, so it is odd that he questions himself the same way Yanyan does. Despite what I said though, I do still love this story just the way it is, so don't let me change your mind too easily. Thank you for all your hard work in writing!