Kaell

This chapter seemed bland and artificial, the antagonist seemed extremely unrealistic. The Protagonist was spouting hypocritical remarks he didn't even follow. "Power is responsibility." He was acting pretty irresponsible to me. And he easily murdered someone, adding on to the unrealistic scene this was.

Hurry up and update this already! It's a novel that's better than most of the trashy romance novels on this site. So do it already! Just to add filler to reach the word limit. I want to say that I REALLY hate the System novels that are popular on this site. The first time you read it makes it seem original and interesting, then there's another one, and another... I'M FED UP ALREADY! STOP TRANSLATING THESE PIECE OF SHIT SYSTEM NOVELS!